that's ok keep it coming! yes schools finally out (daughter gradudtated yeah babay) so nice relaxing time until colege eek! keep it rolling!

I like the plot of your story and even the writing is good. But I think your a little too abrupt. I mean there isn't enough of those little details that get the reader hooked into the story.
But all the 18 chapters so far are good so don't stop now!

your story's okay, good plot even if the contents a bit fuzzy. keep up the good work ^_^

hello! imma jus reviewing here cause i'm kinda cleaning up my story alert. it seriously messed up cause i've been receiving the same email alerts for the same stories...SO this is much easier than clicking the drop down button oh and don't beem surprised if you have the exact same review as other stories i jus copy/paste this one and sorry for not really commenting on the story i'll review next time promise. toodles

...what a mushy story...

truely, you are a hopless romatic. HAHAHAHAH! *ahem*

*don't flame me, I know her*

hi, i read this story a long time ago when i didnt have an account and didnt no how to rview. and ive always wanted to say the: THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT!I LOVE IT!
well, i'm glad i got that off my chest. please update soon or i will have to do something derastic, and you wouldn't want that, would you?

I think that it has been a while since I reviewed your story as well. You did a good job and I really hope that you are working on another chapter so I can read some more of the s tory. I'm glad that you were able to get the cahtper this time. It's very irritating when the computer doesn't do what you want it to do. Well I'll be sending you the next chapter of WMA as soon as I get 19 and 20 separated. I wish you luck in your classes. I'll talk to you later. Arigato and ja ne!

Nice chapter please continue.

Execellent but you said it SHORT. Yes I'm Old but there a saying: Your as old as you feel. And you finally own the whole thing yeah!

great story. update as soon as you can

that is a great story please finish it soon or continue it it is so awesome detailed and perfect

very interesting story...u must update soon so i know what happens! ^_^

Well lets just say I don't have to deal with anymore. I deal with WORK! The only thingI remotly deal with school is my daughters. Ha Now you know my age. Just kept up the good work. (School too)

This is a ver ywell written story. I like it alot. I hope you keep going with this story and I hope that you update soon.

Hey Tramie great story, i wish i had writting style just as good as yours. I don't know alot about escaflowne but hope to soon. Update soon everyone is egure to read.