That's it? No more?

Love the plot.

Hey, wow, I LOVE this, this is really really awesome! Youre a genius!

But why dont you update? Please, Im dying to know what happens next, I want Anakin to talk with Luke again and getting his trial. Im really wondering if hes coming to heaven or to hell...

So please go on!

finish the story!

Good idea, but I can't consider the story itself as good. you're quite fanatic in both expressing your opinion about eu and your writing style.

um.. i think you have a really good premise, but it could have been executed better.

Aw! How sweet! :)

Very cool! Please continue.

I like Shmi's speech to Anakin. I think she's right - he did do bad things, but he thought he was doing the right thing for the galaxy as a whole, and he never stopped responding as a slave. Interesting story.

You have an interesting premise here, and so far you've implimented it very well. Your dialogue is snappy and your spelling/grammar is overall, quite good.
However, your fic is hampered by an OOC Anakin. The third chapter shows a lot of improvement on his character, though. Keep heading in that direction.

I like it keep up the good work

This is good. Better than all the other chapters...and the plot thickens! :)
The people are characterized a bit better, but they still don't seem qhite right.
I also wan to know more about Shio. He interests me.

Whoa, sorry, but you've got everyone REALLY out of character. The idea is great, but the people aren't portrayed accurately.
By the way, Anakin DID become a Jedi Knight before he turned to the darkside.

A very interesting and creative story. Although I think Anakin's dialect is too casual for Vader - he sounds more like the kid than the Sith Lord. That's just my opinion. I like that Qui-Gon joined them too.

Great, but I really don't think Anakin would be an atheist, or say Holy Crap either. In the Galaxy Far, Far Away, they don't swear like that. :)
Other than that, I like it, and WANT MORE!

Please keep writing! I need 2 know what happens next!