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| sab1 2002-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseI LOVED IT!! it was really aaah cute lol |
| Rose Black 2002-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWOW! What a Mary Sue! I really meant this to be serious, but I wrote this very soon after I discovered ff.n, and...WOW! Clink, you are so right. I laughed and laughed! |
| Kora 2001-11-25 ch 1, | abusehehehehe ooooh cute little story! i wish i had noticed it sooner, but with all the stories that are constantly published, it's easy for some, even good ones, to get lost in the shuffle. but i'm really glad that i found this! good job! is there going to be more? i hope so! |
| S.O.S 2001-02-14 ch 1, | abuseawwwww...cool...aw i loved it (sos's cold raxck hard heart chips off slightly) awwwwww....hee hee..cool tension filled as well! |
| angel13 2001-02-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Thats a cool crossover. Hmm-actually, in the beginning-when they were talking about the "girl downstairs" I was expecting it to be Annie!! LOL "Golly, Mr. Kloppman! It sure is a hard knock life sellin' papes!" DOnt get me wrong, I love Annie too--but still.....that would be funny |
| Clink 2000-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI'm sure you worked very hard on this fan fic, but I have to say that it is completely ordinary. It's almost as if you rolled every common premise that has ever been played out in the Newsiedom into this one very short story. Fan fic has a chance to be incredibly unique, girl! I'm sure that you could do much better; you could use your imagination to find a new way of introducing a girl, letting her become a star, reuniting her with her long lost brother and winning the hearts of the guys that could blow the socks off of each and every premise that is way too played out. Sure, it's a nice dream for a girl to be that perfect, but the descriptiveness is incredibly lacking. I received NO description whatsoever. What was she thinking? What was everyone thinking? What did they even LOOK like? Just a little constructive critisism from one writer to another. Don't take it wrong, okay? Good luck! |
| Solitaire 2000-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseis there going to be more to this story? please? |