Nifty, definitely nifty. I could see this being an actual episode. You have a very good style, humorous, but straight to the point. This one's a keeper.

That was a cool story.

Not planning a sequel...I know there isn't much of Hercules, but I'm proud to say I'm a verfied Iolaus addict-otherwise known as an Iolausian *G*

Well written, fully descriptive, not much of Hercules but a good story nontheless. Is there a future story for Helen and Iolaus? There is a good opening left for one.