any chance of a sequel?

Cool! Oh loved it! But I thought they took any girl who could channel to the tower to teach her to channel to keep her from killing herself. But hey, who cares! Great story! Loved it! Keep up the good work!

good story, the ending was good.

Nifty. Very nifty. It's nice having a character who doesn't want to become Aes Sedai. I like this the best of your WoT stories because it isn't as predictable, though I figured that Darian was a one-time Warder from the start. It has an element of sexuality that is absent in Jordan's works, and for that I applaud you. It's nice to see people building on RJ instead of copying him. However, your characters are your weakness once again. While they have more depth than the ones in "Miriel and Arathorn", you tell the reader too much and show them too little. You tell the things that Anya hears from Darian, but you don't show Darian's actual conversation. I think that if you had more dialogue between the two, you would get deeper characters.