I don't believe you! You're actually writing this! WOW.

You know, really, if you had wanted help with writing the Mythennielle character -who is both commanding and a bit of a wimp- I wouldn't've minded. In fact, I think I would have enjoyed it. BTW, you're welcome. I didn't mind helping at all.

I really like how you've started this out. Your imagery is great and although you're not accustomed to the character type, you're doing a pretty good job.

Although I know why you did it, do you have to continue using 'k' for 'c' in Myrth's speech? Maybe it's just me and, if it is, don't change it, but it's kinda annoying.

Anyways, I hope you continue it soon.
gg~