:] swet update asap

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

hey nice plot plz continue it looks intresting so far

M...interesting start. Please do continue, it has potential. I like all the mistery that you are adding to the plot.

I liked this very much. I would be careful when you post due to formatting. has a problem with formatting correctly which forces it's authors to painstakingly do it on their own. Wonderful descriptions "cape of gold" beautiful originality. I always love stories where Usagi and Mamoru get together before they know they loved one another before... it brings the characters depth. I think you should explore this story more, give it more life by adding to its contents. If you need anything just drop me a line but I hope you shall post on this soon for I am intrigued to see where you take it.

So far from what I've read this story is really good and I like it and I'm gonna take a guess that it was Darien in Serena's room while she was sleeping he's such a naughty boy breaking into a girls room while she slept.But so far your story is really good.