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| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAw. Warm and fuzzy all over. They want to be close, but they're both so prickly. Good J/I. |
| Ireland1 2003-10-22 ch 1, | abusehello, loved your story... do more... |
| Zephyr 2003-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThe END? Are you sure? Couldn't you go on? I'd have to read it to be sure whether or not you had this in mind, but this scenario would be great as a lead in into how Jack and Irina team up to find Syd's killer(s)/Syd. But it is a great story as it is and ends well (just wish it didn't end so soon) |
| Lady Adyra 2003-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely adored this! You caught the essence of the uneasy relationship between them, all the mistrust, the anger, the sadness and the attraction. Their fight, their truce, their remembrance, their words, all the elements in the right dose... Beautifully written. Is there a way you could consider writing another part, pretty please? ;) |
| MyAlias 2003-08-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was a simple, very nice story. Good job! |
| SuperSwank22 2003-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is good. Nice job! |