 Boredood 2009-06-09 . chapter 5 It reads so much like a novle, you actually forget it's a fanfic! |
 The Invisible Fan 2009-02-26 . chapter 17Amazing story! I've really enjoyed reading it and hope to see it finished someday. |
 rewind gone nuts 2008-10-22 . chapter 17It's been a while since this story is updated. I hope that you'll finish this story, as it's a lot better than the current amount of yaoi crap that seems to make up 99% of this area these days. A good chapter, though I'll point out something of a misnomer; when Link-in-Captain's Hat swims to the Bokoblin Lookout Tower (and how/why they built those, as well as those rafts, is one of the biggest mysteries of Wind Waker), you describe him as resembling a Skulltala. That's the skull-like spider enemy.
Beyond that, though, this chapter is still at the same high standard of quality as the rest. |
 Shadow Link50 2008-06-19 . chapter 1Hmm once you're able to update, if you could respond to my review I was wondering if Fierce Deity will make an appearance? Does Link even still have the mask?
Hmm... *imagines link using the Fierce Deity Mask and the Bunnyhood-infused Ring of Absorption*..
Or, if he can modify the ring, the Fierce Deity Mask and a Giant Mask-infused Ring.
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 Shadow Link50 2008-06-18 . chapter 16I must say, I love you portray Link and Tatl. I love Link's personality, so adorable. ^^
..."And knowing Link, he would keep this up for the next few hours if left alone."...
Aww..
Hope you find time to continue soon, I'm happy I found this story again and got it on my favorite story list once more. If you care to look, you're in very exclusive company. |
 Shadow Link50 2008-06-17 . chapter 17Heya! ^^ Haven't been able to read or review the story in quite a while. I must say though, I really love how you decided to go with the MM - WW interaction. Hopefully you'll find some free time to continue writing. I'll be sure to keep following the story when you do. I'm still surprised more people don't read this story, its far more original then the majority of stories being posted today. |
 ??? 2008-01-06 . chapter 17 I really like this fic. Keep it up! I want to see this to the end! |
 CrystalC 2007-12-01 . chapter 17Updates Are Good. More please. |
 Youthninja 2007-11-29 . chapter 17Yay! An Update! This is one of my favorite fan fictions, so I was afraid you would stop! |
 Cloud Dancer1014 2007-11-09 . chapter 16-I've long been a fan of your story, but it's been a while since you've last update. Is everything OK? |
 MoonGirl2 2007-10-19 . chapter 16 I love this story! Your protrayal of Tatl is fateful to her in game personality and just how I imagined her. I can't wait for more chapters! |
 jon58840 2007-07-20 . chapter 16When are you going to update this story? |
 rewind gone nuts 2007-06-18 . chapter 16An intriguing story, and one I'm liking quite well so far. If you keep writing, I'll try and keep reviewing. Just two questions, though only the first relates to the actual story. Firstly, when Link and Tatl encountered that storm, was that just a "natural" storm, or the curse of darkness Ganon spreads over the Great Sea? Similarly, when the wind changed abruptly, was that due to the influence of the Waker of WInds somewhere else on the Great Sea?
Secondly, in some of your earlier chapters, you mentioned the Medlink Federation as the final line. Are you member? |
 Youthninja 2007-06-10 . chapter 16A great chapter by great writer! I can't wait until the hero of time meets the hero of winds! |
 Arvel 2007-06-08 . chapter 16Since I'm sober (and am currently supposed to be outside in this stifling heat doing yard work) now is the perfect time to drop by with a review. I hope you enjoy these long reviews. I tend to be quite garrulous when discussing stories as my reviews are generally a written stream-of-consciousness as I recall the chapter. (Or chapters, as is more often the case.)
Some advice that may be appropriate, where pacing in your story is concerned, would be to "take your time and enjoy the ride" so to speak. The last few chapters have been moving very briskly, which is fine, considering the transition in setting being made. However, once Link finds civilization and starts exploring this 'new' world it would be nice to see a lot of detail go into both the physical exploration as well as how Link emotionally and psychologically handles the drastic changes to his home. If you think about it, everyone he ever knew (to his and our knowledge anyway) is long dead. Even the 'eternal' children of kokiri forest have long been buried beneath the sands of time.
It's been several years since I played Windwaker and I enjoyed most of it (albeit finding the triforce pieces was an exercise in frustration), however I haven't read any fics based on it (probably because there weren't any characters in it that particularly grabbed my interest), so I'll continue following along to see how this story pans out in my typical haphazard fashion.
Ah, before I forget, speaking of the triforce of courage one wonders how duplicates of the same triforce piece will come into play.. Or perhaps Link has returned to Hyrule before the other Link set out to gather the pieces. I have been under the assumption that he's returned after WW Link completed his quest but I could be wrong. At any rate, I'll shut up now. |