It's been nearly a year since you updated this story! Now, I'm not really one to review much, and I can hardly call myself a Sailor Moon fan, but this is one of the few really well written SM fics that I've come accross, and I'll be DAMNED if I see it go to waste! Please update, don't let it go to waste, it's an awesome story line, and skillfully well written, alot better than what I normally come up with in other fanfics. So you keep writting, I'll keep reading, and untill the next time, I'll be watching you... ;)

awesome...more?...it was an awesome story...

*twitchsniff* I kinda likes Chib-Usa, besides the fact that she got rather, shall we say, annoying. I must say, very nice so far. I like Aya, pretty good character creation done there darling.
Keep it up...I am a major fan of Sailor Moon:P
-Starlight

very good story. I kinda like the serious tone that this chapter has. I can't wait till Aya meets Neo-Queen Serenity.

wow what a great story. i usually stay away from chibi-usa fics because they always were a bit corney or very unrealistic. well i am glad i tried yours. when Usagi was dieing i had to hold back the tears. it was so moving. i can't wait to see how aya does in crystal tokyo. keep up the good work.
abby

Sad but a good way of letting Aya learn the truth. Can't wait to see how you handle her meeting the senshi.

ack! I was half expecting Pluto to walk out of the shadows and introduce herself. You are doing a wonderful job with this. I'd like a little more description of Aya though, I get teh blonde hair makes her like Serenity, but waht else makes her Aya? This may be coming in the next chapters but I though I'd comment anyway. Again great story. :)

Excellent! There were only a few places that I got confused but you quickly drew me back in. Please continue this. It sounds as though you have an original villan too. There are so few of those now.