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Lirazel
2006-12-16 . chapter 10
I love this story. It's perfectly realistic--things could so easily have gone this way. I love their relationship through every line of this. Kudos on a great story.
holyshnitzel
2006-04-03 . chapter 10
Omg I love in character in love Hyde so much. Great job!
bklyangel
2005-06-29 . chapter 10
please make a sequal. pretty please?
lala
2005-06-20 . chapter 10
Awesome! Sweet! Cute!! Everything it needed to be. Extremely well written. All characters perfectly "in character". Loved it! Please write more "That 70s' Show" fanfics!!
Mizz-Daizee
2004-05-13 . chapter 1
Wow all i can say is wow. I think loved ech chapter and i think you have real talen for writing fan fiction. I thought the story was really sweet and i think you captured the characters of Hyde and Jackie perfectly.
I'm a first time writer and really bummed that i haven't got any reviews so i would reaaly like you to read my fan fiction and review it and tell me if i need to improve. Thank you. P.s you rock and keep up the good work!
yellowcat909
2004-05-02 . chapter 10
a cute fic. with a good ending.
jwordofmouthbabe57
2004-04-29 . chapter 10
** beautiful! Long time to update though...I'm like that, so I can't really throw stones. 'Last year's fashion'...perfect, perfectly in-character. Wonderful ending. Rocking. Utterly rocking.
butterfly10480
2004-04-26 . chapter 10
I loved it! As usual. And while I am saddened to see it go (And you!), I'm also so very happy you wrote this in the first place.
In many ways, I think this is how S5 *should* have gone. We might not have had as many hot make-out sessions -- we would've gotten a dressing room make out scene, though! Heh. - BUT! You managed to deal with Hyde's insecurities about people leaving him and maybe even Kelso, *before* they actually got together.
If S5 would've gone this wonderful direction, I don't think we would've had the awful nurse incident and lots more of a happy, couple-y Jackie and Hyde.
Together. And in love. Or, deeply in like. As they should be. ;)
Now... to end this long-winded review, a few more superlatives. Wonderful, superb. Perfect.
Excellent job, my dear. =)
basementlover9
2004-04-26 . chapter 10
Wow! I just read the entire fic and that was definetily one of the top three best j/h fics ive EVER read!
Danny's Girl
2004-04-23 . chapter 9
its great...i love it
shonnarae
2004-01-30 . chapter 1
i dont know if you ever have plans to finsh this story...but i really hope you do!! its a great story and your an amazing writer.
What's Their Name
2004-01-25 . chapter 9
this is the...third 70's fanfic ive read (the previous two from an author with another story in another category) and this was...great, amazing, true to character...perfect..wait not perfect but so good perfect seems like the right word to use right now. im going to check out some of your other stuff. Cudos to you.
Kaye
2004-01-08 . chapter 9
Absolutely fantastic. This is an amazing peice of work! You've written such a compelling story with high running emotions and all this with Jackie and Steven completely in character-- And the running theme of the shoes, I have no idea if that was intentional, but it worked out to be a fabulous little example of where their at any point in this story.
PLEASE Update this soon!
Kaye :-)
Lapinina
2004-01-07 . chapter 9
Hyde?
I'm guessing here, give me a break...
Lapinina
2004-01-06 . chapter 3
I'm reviewing so I can find you again
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