 Garnet 2005-11-27 . chapter 17 Dear Kami! Very ** off Anna! Run Away! |
 Kaori 2005-01-29 . chapter 17 X_X E! I havent checked the SK section in forever (this is the only fic i check! XD I still love it *sighs happilly* And Hao-sama is ten times hotter when you write O_O; ; ' *laughs* *sweatdrops* oO;; ) Continue writing you!! ~~ TT0TT Rawr *throws llamas at you* |
 Blueramza 2004-07-31 . chapter 17Nice story... but did you have to get that far off track? You cut out some of the best scenes in the movie!
Oh well, at the very least, since you going off track, could you add more Shaman King stuff?
Oh, Hao + Jeanne in elevator scene was great. |
 child of fuin 2004-07-02 . chapter 17when are you going to update agian? it's a really good story :) |
 Thai 2004-07-01 . chapter 17wow... i've never read a fic like this before... very creative... but when are you going to update this?? i'm really anxious for more chapters... =p |
 da-mouse 2004-06-25 . chapter 17Ah, wonderful update! ^_^
So the plot thickens. Hao really is merciless when he wants/needs to be. I was feeling sorry for Jeanne there...obviously she's not a big as a twit as Agent Smith. What I like about your change to Agent Smith's character is that Jeanne had a past that made her that way. Like I said, kinda feeling sorry for her. And then she jumps back and kick-**. XD Oh, I really like the part about Jeanne and how her being data makes her so hard to kill. I thought that was really well-done.
Nice bit of Yoh and Hao interaction there. And it's really /evil/ of Hao to throw the weight of Anna, slaps and all, onto poor Yoh. T_T Great end to the chapter...and so like Anna to slap Yoh. (thumbs up) Although Trinity would not slap Neo. Heh.
Action-packed chapter as usual. The action scenes were certainly wonderfully written...I like the part about the 'Jump' programme thing. I gotta say every chapter keeps me on the edge of my seat. And the fact that you're a wonderful writer certainly helps a lot. Heh.
Love this story to no end. ^_^
=)
mouse-chan |
 Toki Mirage 2004-06-11 . chapter 17THIS WAS FRIGGIN AWSOME!! UDPATE!! as in NOW ^^ |
 Shiranaisan 2004-06-10 . chapter 17heh heh. You're really good at putting humor into serious chappters. |
 Kirume 2004-06-08 . chapter 17>T evil. cliffie. WAI continue!!
-Keiko |
 Kirume 2004-06-08 . chapter 11XD! THE ORACLE IS TAMAO. Hehe.! |
 Kirume 2004-06-08 . chapter 6XD REN IS APOC! HORO IS MOUSE AND LYSERG IS CYPHER!. =D this is so funny, i imagine apoc having big shark fin on head. =P and cypher having pretty eyes and green hair. XD okay, i stop rant. YOU UPDATE!
-keiko |
 Jessi Tsuki 2004-06-08 . chapter 17Haha. *Pokes poor Yoh* |
 Kirume 2004-06-08 . chapter 1XD!! Imagining anna leaping on roof tops and wearin black tights make me laugh! XD. and yoh is neo! =P rhymes. XP HURRAY! ^__^ this is such an original story. me likes
-keiko |
 Silver 2004-05-10 . chapter 16 So much, yet not so much. Clever work with this. Update soon.
Silver |
 Jessi Tsuki 2004-04-03 . chapter 16*Sits and wails slightly* You killed Faust... Faust and Hao are my top two favorite characters. And now you might've killed Hao. *Sigh* Well, please continue this soon. |