Aww this fic was so sweet and simple but still with a nice twist! Thanks for writing!

oh my god!! it was amazing. friggin amazing. i love it. make sure to make more stories. :)

I’m not good with brooms. They don’t like me and I’m perfectly fine with my feet on the ground.”

“Oh, but you see Hermione, I had plans to sweep you off your feet.

lmfao funny


haah sirus went back into the past to make mione fall for him. cute

Sirius looked at his two old friends with no little amount of regret. He sighed as he ran his hand through his hair. There was just no easy way of saying goodbye. Ever.

"Buck up! Look, Whatever happens in the future, happens! There is nother we can do about it. But whatever it is thats got you down, know this. We forgive you." James smiled at his friend as he noticed a tear roll down his cheek.

aww thats nice


cute story. especially loved part 1 when she fell in sirus's lap ahah

I like it.

^^; Okay, I'm glad I read the whole thing, it has a cute storyline, with an interesting twist. But unfortunately I'm kind'a picky, but I just want to help soo... Your story ideas are good, but the dialog and characters are too out-of-character - and not in a good way like crack - and their emotions and speach are either too dull or just plain hectic. Or maybe it's just the way I read it ^^;; My Mum says I read or hear things differently from how most people percieve them, and normally in a negative way. I really shouldn't be this picky or criticing 'cause my fanfics are probably crap, but I really have trouble getting my - wonderful and splendiforous - ideas out.

Okay, about Chapter 3/4... It's kinda...pathetic. I mean, your not a bad writer, and you have GREAT ideas, real good and cute, but I would've slapped him across the face for saying he's in love with me! Actually, I would've slapped him in the face for moving anywhere near that fast. He's hawt and charming and stuff, and if I was Hermione I would've had a huge crush on the older version of him anyway, but it's just silly to feel in 'love'.

i enjoyed the story. it showed i new fun care free hermione granger and the same old funny hamesome sirius black along with his marauder ways.

very nice beginning!

Good job i really liked but i just thought i'd point out that it shud read "By the power VESTED in me" not invested

his deep chocolate eyes? wait, wasn't he supposed to have grey eyes? like the story anyways.

wow, fanfctastic job. I love it so so much!!

hey just to give you a heads up your chapter called "confrontations"is actuly a protal to a inyasha story can you change it plase cause it's hard to uderstand a story when you miss a chapter.Well it's a good story anyway please update soon:)

oh! tell us when your website is done!

*does the cute and fluffy dance* aw that was so cute! I loved it adorable! great job! brillient I don't have any suggestions though uh anyways Brillint!

great story.