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| OGK 2003-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally nice. THanx for reviewing my story. And e-mailing you.. kinda busy ri--ght now.. lOL... and i thnk our tomezones are drastically diferent. Lmao... and yeah, please send me that piccie of Sirius and Snape. I"m into Sirius.. but not into harry potter as it is.. yes yes... I'm wierd... ^~: |
| Feya 2003-08-15 ch 1, | abuseWow! Good job! Continue writing! ~Feya |
| whitewolf787 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery Good Ruby. So what did he do to you oh and are there chess tornament done yet! Hey Where is the other one. OURS! TRIGIC ROSE The Begining and End of All Torment. PLEASE GET IT UP! oh and other people please r/r it. with our minds together its really good! |
| Erin 2003-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice! I LOVE that song! And it does fit the situation well, since as much as we hate to admit it, Christine was NOT really loving Erik at that point...good job! |
| Shandethe Sanders 2003-08-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting take on the situation, and I love any insight into Christine. (I hate it when she's portrayed as a ditz, slut, or any combination thereof.) I sort of wish there had been more about how Christine did love Erik. No matter how much you love someone, being forced into that kind of decision will induce hate, or at least feelings of ill will. I love the choice of song, too...it's perfect. My only gripe is that the lyrics should be in italics, or otherwise different from the rest of the type. It's a little confusing. I love original concepts like this...keep writing! |