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| admirrer 2007-04-02 ch 11, anon. | abusei have been reading and reading this for ages now could you please send me the rest of the story i really really want to knoow what happens. i reckon something should happen between jamie and jesse again. |
| gerardlover123 2007-01-02 ch 11, | abusePlease keep writing! This is an awesome story! i love it! |
| Khamaat 2006-11-08 ch 11, | abuseThis story is brilliant! You captured the charracter's personalitys so well ^^. Hope you update soon, I'll be watching. |
| mary k. 2006-08-30 ch 11, anon. | abuseTHat was kinda' akward...wow... But I really liked it. I like that you didn't really change the story to much just inserted another character and let her interact!! great job! please write more soon! |
| alonefreehearted 2006-08-17 ch 11, | abuseCATIE BEAR! This story is so cute! I'm in love with it! A nice break from Pirates and Anime! LOL Keep goin, baby doll, i'll be reading! Rachel |
| 3emeyah 2006-07-17 ch 11, anon. | abusei love your story it's so cool and real not like other fictions were everything goes really fast. so keep on writting i want to know how would jaime younger deal with her brothers...:) |
| Ksasera Aditi 2006-02-27 ch 7, | abuseI love the story but you DO realize that the Younger's and James's are COUSINS right? I mean, that would make Jamie and Jesse close enough in relation that if they hooked up and had kids it would be in breading. Anyway, love the story other than that little detail. |
| Satiana 2006-02-09 ch 11, | abuseAwe... I'm so glad you updated. I'd be ** if my brother did that to me in front of everybody. She has to do something to get him back prank wise. I love this story and I'm just glad you didn't forget about it. |
| Sdkhb 2005-12-24 ch 11, | abuseOMG! I love this story. I know you haven't updated in a long Time but please UPDATE son! I love this story more then the movie if it s possible! |
| Christine 2005-12-21 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis is a great story, you have the characters down perfectly and Jaime is a great addition to the original story. Please update soon! I'll be checking. |
| southrngrl16 2005-11-19 ch 11, | abuseI just saw the movie and loved it!! This story is awesome! You really made the characters perfect! Hurry an'update! |
| ReAwaken 2005-11-18 ch 11, | abusei absolutely LOVE your story. it is so good that i couldn't wait to get out of school and go home to read it. you so need to complete it! PLEASE, I BEG YOU, COMPLETE THE STORY! tehee :P |
| Aoibhinn 2005-09-25 ch 11, | abuseI love-love-love-love this story. Please keep posting. You are so talented. |
| Jen 2005-09-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseYeah an update!! I love your story. When I saw this movie I wished that they had had a female outlaw. All these prissy lady like girls really annoy me in movies. So does Zee make another appearence and does she try to steal Jesse? Please update again soon. |
| Jenny 2005-08-08 ch 11, anon. | abuseHey, this is a great story! Can't wait for more. |