I really enjoyed this story, sorry if i dont have any constructive critisizm for you. I think that the movie should have acrually ended like that. Is there going to be a sequal to your storie?

Really, excellent writing style. I really would like to see this added to the movie. You did well portraying the characters, and for that, kudos.

Interesting idea, but not your best work. Seems to be a little bit too much of a stretch. You seem to work best when you confine yourself to more realistic premises and work your great grasp of characterization within those limits. Enjoyable, though. How about something exploring Bill and Amsterdam's relationship-fill in the blanks of the script? I believe you're the writer to do it.

o I liked this! It written very well! : )