Pretty good again. I wonder what things will be like at school with Harry in the Order and Draco in the...er...wtf is it called? Death Eater people's group? lol! Anyways, nicely done! I hope for an update soon!

Nikki

oh. I loved Fred and George in this chapter. They are so on character and i loved how they gave Harry access to the shop *grins* Brilliant!

Nikki

Oh. Creepy. Draco is now a part of Voldemort's army. Stupid idiot. He's gonna regret it. Or maybe not. I wonder how Lucius feels about all this? I liked the brotherly hug Ron gave Harry. That made me pause and go "Aw!" Nice. Harry would be off character because of the death of Sirius. Alot of author's can't convey the sadness of it too well but you did a great job.Yay! And unofficial member of the order. Sets up a nice conflict in the story. You have Draco joining the army of darkness and Harry joining the one of light. Very, very, VERY, great and orginal idea.I don't think Lupin would know the prophecy. It's only Dumbledore, Trelawny (she doesn't even remember it) and Harry. The prophecy is safe unless Dumbledore tells it or someone else heard it and told it that J.K Rowling has not yet specified. Go Vicky! lol! he joined the order...what will Hermione, wait...what will RON think about this? *grins* Another great chappie hunni! Luved it!

Nikki

Another brilliant chapter. The initiation ceremony was very scary and dark. There were a few sentences that sounded forced and choppy and a couple errors with past and present tense. But other than those it was perfect! I loved the darkness of it all and i loved the story youb have with Harry. It's nice to see it alternate back and forth like that and your characters are pretty well on character. Er...if that made sense. ^_^ Great job!

Nikki

P.s. Do you know how to make the bold and italic writing show up?? Whenever I transfer bold words or italic's onto fanfiction, they never come out. *sniff*

ooh. I like this very much so far. It's got a very great pssible storyline and it's written well. I liked the pov from Draco. Normally when people do that they make Draco out to be some good, innocent boy. You actually stuck with the creep that he is and held it the same. Nice job!!

Nikki

It has been almost two weeks with no update so I am out of here. I am deleting my bookmark for this story - sorry!

dun-dun-dun! yay! i can't wait to see what happened with harrys parents - it should be really interesting and i'm sure you won't disappoint! update soon! :-)
Loz

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You're back too :-) That's great, I was kind of worried why you didnt update in so long. Well, I didnt either, did I :-/ . Anyhow, thanks for your lovely review :-)
GREAT CHAPTER! I didnt think it was boring at all!
I just love the way you write this story, with the flipping back and forth between Draco and Harry! Very, very nice. (I think I said something like that before, I hope you dont mind :-) ).
Oh and I'm so much looking forward to the next chapter! I loved the scene in OOtP when Harry got into Snape's Pensive and was able to watch his parents and the marauders... A little sad, of course... but still so nice.
And I also love the way you're writing! very descriptive, very nice :-)
So, I see you at your next chapter which I'm looking forward to read and review!
Talk to you soon,
Best, Sabrina

Please lets not start falling behind with the updates. This is a good story and I want to read more.

wow! You are QUITE a writer! your version seems very likely to happen, with draco becoming a death eater and all. im on my 4th chapter as well. and its NOT at all as good as yours. keep writing, im gonna put your story on my favorite's list.

This is a brill story - i can't wait to read more of it! i look forward to finding out what happens!

OOh! Great! I like it! Your characters seem like just out of the book! Urgh--how do you get italics?? That bugs me...mine never works...good job!

Another chapter for me to review :-)!!
I'm glad you got to post this new chapter so soon! I know that school and stuff really take up quite some time.. :-(
Well, I loved this chapter! Again, I think it's very well written!!
I love the way you portray Harry and Draco's feelings in this *parallel way*... I dont know if you can say that, but I guess you know what I mean :-) It's very artistic!
You also got Fred and George's characters portray described wonderfully!! Felt like reading them in a real HP-book :-)
Oh and thanks for mentioning me at the end of your chapter! It's totally my pleasure, I love your story and I cant wait for chapter 5!! Hope you'll get to post it soon :-)
Oh and I love the name of Draco's houseelf! Hundy :-) hehe. If I'm allowed to guess here... Maybe Hundy is going to have a more important part in your story in chapters to come? I dont know, maybe I just thought so because you said he's rather large for a house-elf... Oh well, I'm sure I'm wrong, but it's fun to guess anyhow :)
Ok, keep up the great work, love your story!
Bye bye, see you at your next chapter!
Sabrina

Hi! Since I already "reviewed" chapter 3 once I had to post an un-signed review :-) But you still know it's me so no harm done ;)
I totally loved this chapter!! It felt like reading part of the 6th book!! Everybody's so much in character!
The scenes with Voldemort and Draco (and MacNair of course) were really spooky and I think it's great how you describe Draco feeling rather uneasy but still so determined to be part of the DeathEaters to take revenge!
And the part at Grimmauld Place... *sigh*... I see that you and I think of Harry in very simliar ways as on how he will be feeling after Sirius' death! I like the way you captured his emotions and his grief. I simply know that he's just so very sad after this and you pointed that out so well!
I cant wait for your next chapter :) I'll be back to read and review it as soon as I find out about it. I understand that you probably dont have that much time with school and things, but just be sure that I'll patiently be waiting for chapter 4...
And thanks for your lovely review of my chapter 6! It means so much! And it's great that you're guessing on what is going to happen next :) Who knows, who knows... come back to read on, I greatly appreciate it :)
See you at your next chapter or at mine...
sabrina