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Reviews for: Crescent Moon: Mer De Noms
ZWig
2008-09-26 . chapter 12
Alan is awesomely epic. Love this story and the other Crescent Moon stories as well. Keep up the good work!
Ringshadow
2005-05-26 . chapter 5
Technicalities.

First, he can't. James resigned himself to his fate, and he's got business elsewhere.

Second, Alan's powers flex. He can't do everything all the time: he flat forgets he can do things, and he won't do it if he doesn't feel it's right. How can he let his fearless leader be depressed?

Of course, since he's a BARD, even if he's multiclassing, he shouldn't be able to resurrect people at all. But he's also an immortal outsider, so I won't go any farther into D&D rules :)

Thanks for the review, Geoff
Geoffrey Freedman
2005-03-26 . chapter 5
I think that you should have had Alen do that trick were he brings a person back to life on James
Falco's lover
2004-01-26 . chapter 1
Hi Ringshadow!
You know, this was so gorgeous...and everybody seems to want more...so... I was thinking of making THE MANGA! ( With your help, of course) More for the Fans! MORE,MORE,MORE,MORE!
Janus Kamaren
2003-10-07 . chapter 12
Awesome. That's all I can say.

Is this the end of the series? Seems like it. If it is, then good job! Paladins/Rangers rock!
Fangirl Beverly
2003-10-03 . chapter 12
YEAH! ALRIGHT! WHOO! *clapples* That was awesome! Holy wars, kids, and Alan's the new leader of the Bayou! ^^ It's a shame to see the trilogy end...but it was still great! I love your writings! Good good job! ^^
Janus Kamaren
2003-09-19 . chapter 9
This is REALLY starting to get good. Never thought that Wolf would come back. Keep it up!
Destructor
2003-08-30 . chapter 7
An excellent story that is in desperate need of more positive reviews.

Your alternate reality/timeline, yet continuing to use the established Star Fox characters, is very well done and thought out, and an excellent read.

I hope to see you continue publishing your works here, as more readers need to see what you've written. And yes, I've already read your works via your site. They're all as well done as this one.
Janus Kamaren
2003-08-30 . chapter 7
Wow... reminded me of Pirates if the Carribean...

Alan rocks!
Janus Kamaren
2003-08-20 . chapter 6
This is really starting to get interesting. Keep it up!
BTW, no offense, but you're kinda supposed to have a disclaimer. Just a friendly reminder, don't take it personally.
Alankria
2003-08-15 . chapter 6
hey, i would have reviewed this sooner but I've already read the whole thing. So I'm just saying- it's all good. And I'm really enjoying 'ReAnimation'. ^.^
Janus Kamaren
2003-08-12 . chapter 4
This keeps getting better and better. I loved the draconic Falco scene.
Janus Kamaren
2003-08-08 . chapter 1
I love this series! Whenever I think that there's no possibility of a sequel, you always prove me wrong, which is a good thing. Keep it up!
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