That was so sweet. It's nice to see something like this work out.

Excellent! I never tire of reading and re-reading it! _

I read it last time and I read it again and I loved it last time and I love your story now! _ Good work! Pity that you did not continue to write more WOT fan fic!

ummm, what's a manshima and a siswai?

*grins* Could you be a Lord Of The Rings fan? Arathorn? Heh heh... Anyway, I love your fic... One slight problem, though... small... One of the Oaths is that an Aes Sedei cannot channel against another woman except for her life. Um, I noticed Miriel whacked Carca over the head with Air... Which is sorta illigal. So you may want her to, like, kill Carca's Air bonds, and have Arathorn roll away, and have Miriel stand with Arathorn, making an unbeatable team... and little snooty will be screwed. Wah ha! ...:D Lol, just a suggestion. You're a really good writer though! Write more fics!

I LOVED IT!

I was grinning like an idiot when I finished *smiles sheepishly*

I loved Mirel's personality ( I hope I spelled her name right )!

So sweet. POW to the woman who dares Bond Miriel's man, :)

It was good, but you could of built on the two girls rivarly, I also think it is kinda funny that he didn't discourge circa(sp?) but it was good, I look forward to reading some more. Also I don't get why cicra would try to force the guy to bond with her since it is against the aes sedai law, so soon after she was raised!

Pretty good, although I was a little mystified as to why Arathorn (did that name come from Tolkien by any chance?) didn't do anything to discourage Carca.

AWWWWW! That was SO sweet! Very well written! . Please keep writing!

Ooh! So sweet, so pretty...I likes! I likes very much...

ahhh! how sweet! write a sequel, please!

great story!

One of the best WoT fanfiction stories I have read so far. Enchanting and

lyrical, although you could have worked on the Miriel/Carca rivalry a little more. I hope to read more of your work soon.

I liked! only odd bit about it was Carca's attempt to force Arathorn to become her Warder . . . as I recall, Aes Sedai consider that along the same lines as a man raping a defenseless girl, so it just seemed kinda strange that Carca would try something like that without further explanation (like, was she actually a Darkfriend? or a seriously obssessive mental case? *shudders*). but that aside, this is a great story! thanks for sharing it :o)