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| yumi 2005-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe story is quite good, and your character is a real **. |
| KrissXed 2003-10-11 ch 12,  | abuseInteresting... I love this story as you already know. I love that you finally brought Goku into this but there is only one poblem... MORE VEGETA! -Syd |
| Crecy 2003-09-06 ch 11, | abuseYipe! What's gonna happen! You have to tell me! Plez update soon! |
| MQ 2003-08-30 ch 6, | abuseI luv this story! UPDATE SOON! =^-^= |
| KrissXed 2003-08-29 ch 10, | abuseI love it, I love it, I love it! This is the greatest story!! I love the name Tayven, I am thinking of adding it to my baby name list, is that okay?? lol I can't wait for the chapters to come!! -Syd P.S. MORE VEGETA! |
| Crecy 2003-08-27 ch 9, | abuse*Blink* How could CHILDREN do something like that? Even when the Z fighters DO get control over their bodies again, their looks will convince the innocents that their murderers. Unless they SEE the spirits of the children come oout of their bodies or something. Plez update soon! |
| KrissXed 2003-08-15 ch 8, | abuseOh, somathing bad is gonna happen... but I liked, and I can't wait to read more!! -THANKS- Sydney P.S MORE VEGETA! |
| Crecy 2003-08-14 ch 8, | abuseWow. This is getting out of hand. Wonder how they are supposed to defeat this. Never thought that this could even be a decent fight, but heck. You turned the tables and its just getting goob. I compliment you on finding an enemy that is completely new. (To me at least) Update soon! ^_~ |
| Crecy 2003-08-13 ch 7, | abuseWow. The situation's getting worse by the second. Update soon. |
| GothicDream 2003-08-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseCan't find anything wrong with it besides a few spelling mistakes, but we all make those. Other than that it's pretty good. Great story. |
| KrissXed 2003-08-10 ch 5, | abuseWow, I'm impressed. When I read the summary, I thught it was going to be a stupid story, but so far, I LOVE IT! I'm SO glad you stayed true to Vegeta's true character, HE IS BYFAR ME FAVORITE! I can't wait to see more great work from you, and if you have time, e-mail me or better yet, read my story... -THANKS-Sydney |
| Crecy 2003-08-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseGood two chapters I haven't read. Luv da chapters. Keep going! |
| Cat9190 2003-08-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis was a really good story. I liked it and it gives us thatdon't know much about ki (me being one of them though i do know a bit about DBZ). PLease let me know when you put up the next chapter. Cat |
| callista 2003-08-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseyou have an excellent writing style, write more chapters. the story did get a little weird at the end, but it was still very good. |
| Crecy 2003-08-08 ch 3, | abuseGood story so far. Nice twist in this chapter. What are their ages anyway? Tayven and them? I'm kinda wondering on that, but great chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter! |