I really like your stories, and I've seen that you've gotten better with time, but this chapter was really quite short.

i enjoyed the chapter! the story was really amazing! you could also add in another chapter on how they're doing after they found each other and things going on in the house at dinner and more!

i enjoyed the chapter! the story was really amazing! you could also add in another chapter on how they're doing after they found each other and things going on in the house at dinner and more!

This was a really good story, and the ending was sweet.

Nice story. I would have liked Jack to punch Cal, but all in all, good job

This was great, I'm sad it's over but that happens you know? I love it

what happens next i want to know pleas write more

aw. great job.

that wa sa really good story I thinky ou should add an epilouge what does monica have?

the whole four thousand dollar thing was cheesy, but me LOVE cheese!

ok one thing: the sign of their engagment was the heart of the ocean. she should have thrown THAT overboard. that would have been funny. this is really good, tho.

This story was great! I loved it. Your writing was very good...as always. Great job! You should make a sequel!

GREAT STORY!

Great story, please continue your writings. I'll look forward reading more of them.

FireHead

Yet, another great story! Well DOne!