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| Reviews for Unlock and Control |
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   Tears of Eternal Darkness 10/14/05 . chapter 1... hm... it was a bit fast. try adding a bit more detail to it. good job though! - |
| DarkWolf88 3/13/05 . chapter 1 hey this was a pretty good story line...but it moved a little too fast! other than that, i liked it alot _ |
| Droopy1389 1/30/04 . chapter 1 YOU LET KAI DIE...HOW COULD YOU! |
| talaluvar 8/8/03 . chapter 1 wow! loved it. kai died :D bout time, everyone loves him 4 sum reason -_- don know why (cos tala rulz) well anywayz good short story *puts both her two thumbs up* oh and do u have msn, if you do can i add u? |
