|Reviews for Unlock and Control|
| Tears of Eternal Darkness 10/14/05 . chapter 1
... hm... it was a bit fast. try adding a bit more detail to it.
good job though!
| DarkWolf88 3/13/05 . chapter 1
this was a pretty good story line...but it moved a little too fast!
other than that, i liked it alot _
| Droopy1389 1/30/04 . chapter 1
YOU LET KAI DIE...HOW COULD YOU!
| talaluvar 8/8/03 . chapter 1
wow! loved it.
kai died :D bout time, everyone loves him 4 sum reason -_- don know why (cos tala rulz)
well anywayz good short story *puts both her two thumbs up*
oh and do u have msn, if you do can i add u?