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| Dmik33 2007-07-03 ch 2, | abuseThat was so sad, you did a great job with the interaction between Shadow and Relm |
| Gauy 2003-08-17 ch 2, | abuseWOWS! That was soo sad... Your first chapter was so well written. It seemed kinda different from what you usually write, but that's not a bad thing. It's different and I like it. It fits very well to the way the story is written. As for the epilogue, another well written part. I especially like how you did the story in the 1st-person of both Relm and Shadow. This was a great story, athough Shadow died (somewhere in my mind, I feel like he 'exchanged' himself with some already dead guy. But that's probably because in all your other ones, the ending isn't tragic.) Anyway, great story ... sorry it took me so long to read... |
| GAU28 2003-08-10 ch 2, | abuseu know, there really should be more reviews here! i mean, it's so good! i loved it, it was touching and sad and all that stuff at the same time! ur very good at writing! keep up the good work! |
| Gibbsers 2003-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse... I think I read just about every single fic you posted here, and they're all friggin great! |