Well.

I like this. Good chariterisation. No obvious spelling mistakes, or other technical problems. Frankly, this is both new and good, with the potential to be very interesting.

I look forward to seeing more.

that was, strange but very well done. as most of your reviewers said, this story is simply amazing, read like a train, and is pretty believable (I myself have no knowledge whatsoever about the subject so I can believe anything). As far as I could see your spelling is top notch, your style is brilliant and the flow nice and fast.

sometimes it is a bit confusing because you suddenly jump to Ranma's point of view without much of a warning (might be FF who has erased your pharagraph markers), but that's alright. there is only one point of view, making it pretty easy regardless.
you sometimes digress for quite a while. it isn't a problem, but you should make sure you don't exagerate. Genma's story was quite long (though I don't mind because it is refreshing to see someone not writing Genma like a demon incarnate) for example.

But really, the idea, the style, the story is perfect, I loved it from the first till the last word, and await an update.

This story is -so- twisted and wrong, that it's made a u-turn and become great.
The psychological realism is amazing.

Very intriguing. I can't wait to see where this will lead. Please continue. :)

P.S. The only thing I was wondering about were the ages of the girls in the first chapter, I mean... Originally, Kasumi was 19, Nabiki 17, and Akane 16. Did you have Ranma arrive a year earlier, or something? Just want to get that cleared up, is all. ^^

*chuckles* Nice story. Awesome omakes, too! *fol* John Moses Browning! Priceless!

Great story, very unique.
I hope you will find time to continue it.

I'm looking forward to next chapter!

Hahahaha! What a lovely Omake on Chapter 1! Did you get that idea from Machall?

From the offices of AMWOOD co

ps. To any who don't know Machall is a webcomic that has recently 'concluded' by Ian McConville and Matt Boyd. It can be found at and the episode in reference is one of the very first, number four I think.

...wow, a story that seems to hint at something so universally wrong with people but done in a not overly complicated style... briliant!

I didn't know why I clicked on this other than the word 'conjoined' but... I'm kind of glad now... thnak you

Interesting story continue it!

Tell me you've got an update coming. Don't tell me you've given up on this. It's one of the best and most interesting stories I've ever read. Seeing how things go from the beginning with Akane and Nabiki as conjoined twins and engaged to Ranma is very cool.

I like this. I hope you manage to write more of it soon.

Oh, and some kind o scene division would be really nice. If you have them, it seems is removing them.

Excellent story. Very well written. Please update soon...

Ash shooting at Team Rocket would be pretty priceless, you know. Of course you know, that's why you put that there!

So what's the pattern for this thing? One update per year? I think I can live with that.

There are some things one does not expect to come across despite knowing how vast the multiverse can be. And Akane and Nabiki being conjoined twins is one of them. Now this is what I call very interesting.

Hmm, A unique take... I like it. Keep writing.