Chilling and heartwarming and melancholy and insightful. In no particular order.

Once again, I'm impressed. I love how you wrote this one, I like how you do Spike. Perfect grammar (there's an idea...), good characterization, and a cool story idea. Keep writing, please!

Great job, I like! You definitely wrote Spike perfectly. Yay!

I liked it. An interesting insight on Spike's character progression. And you kept him in character the whole time. Good job.

An interesting trip down Spike Lane. It really highlights how much the character has changed.

Very good! Is there an explanation of how he became human, though? That was a lil' confusing. Are you planning to watch Angel? There's supposed to be Spike-age! *grin*