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Nice fic, good to see Kenji examing himself and regaining some compassion.

First songfic? It was terrific. Guess this is another one of those, breaking through Kenji's barrier things.

Great kenji fic very good and emotional

This is odd...I thought I reviewed this. *smacks self* Yes, this was a pretty good first try for a songfic. I Enjoyed it and it wasn't bad at all. It was well timed and perfectly fit the setting and characters. Great Job Christi and keep up the great work.

Not bad for your first Kenji fic. It came out great and it really sounded like Kenji who was talking. He's reactions and emotions are exactly how i would of emagined them and tinks about them throughly and shows us what he thinks of Uriko. Great work Christi and keep it up!

This is really really good for a first attempt at first person POV. It's really hard to write in first person, and I think you pulled it off very nicely, and stayed within the limitations of it and still told a wonderful story. I think you have a great handle on Kenji's character, and I love his slow but perfectly understandable reaction to Uriko. I would love to see more first person stories!

I really love the way this came together, especially with the timing of the song lyrics with what's going on in the story. The "personal project" Uriko takes on is great, especially since we know how it will end up... all in all, I was really impressed.

I loved this prespective of the story. It gives a look into the mind of Kenji. He thinks that love is a weakness, but if that's the case, we'll see how strong he really is. He is pretty cold towards Uriko, because he dosen't like her trying to figure how thinks. He realizes that this comes with her awesome determination. That's a part of Uriko that has been shown perfectly throughout all of Christi's stories. Kenji's attitude of not wanting to show his emotion of love is also shown just as well in her stories, especially this one. Kenji couldn't help, but to accept the kiss from Uriko. Which he scolded himself for doing. This story was done excellently showing a part of the story, A Hidden Bond, from a different POV! Keep it up Christi!_

This great for a first attempt at a songfic. It continues to show how Kenji had to fight with his emotions, before he would admit that he cared for Uriko. It's basically up to Uriko to conquer his stubborn attitude to get him to understand his emotions. This added an even thicker plot to A Hidden Bond. It was evenmore interesting to know that this happened before the fight in, A Hidden Bond. I can't forget to mention that the song for this fic was a beautiful choice! Kenji might have been disgusted by it, but it suited the couple perfectly! I can't wait to read the next!_

Continued excellence. This actually brings Hidden Bond into a better light, because it was here where Riko decided that Kenji still had the ability to love. Opens up the events of Hidden Bond and onward. Very nice, good song too. I like how at each point in the song you had event that brought them closer.

OMG! this is a wonderful fic Christina! it's so discriptive! - you should try making others like it, cuz in my opnion you're great at it.Keep up the good writing

BRAVO BRAVO! ENCORE! I did find a little info about Bloody Roar and it makes a little more sense and I understand it quite a bit I'm continuing to find more info to help myself well keep up the good work :)

Pretty damn good! I'm not much of a POV-fic person, myself, but I loved this one! )

Oooo! Uriko just has to get Kenji! I can't wait for those two to truly get together! Another great job...well written with every emotion spelled out!