It's beautiful. I love it when someone writes something like this.

That was really good! Better than I could ever do anyway. Very poetic too!

Wow. I didn’t think I could like something so purely romantic that much, but really it’s beautiful. My favourite line is “I stole it from you, or perhaps you gave it to me.”

This is a fantastic piece of work. I really enjoyed the way you have portrayed Yami.
I love Yugi's answer at the end.
Hob x

good

that is such a sweet story! keep up the great work!

Oh jo put something from Romeo and Juliet in it. What a nice idea! Yami is so swett in this chapter. He care so much for Yugi!

aw...so sweet

Aw...I love how Yugi responded in the end, Yami is so nice...^_; *sniffle* so cute...well, i hope to see more fics from you! ^-^

Wow ^^ great job! I love it! *g* sweet take on Yami's thoughts ^^

~Marron-chan

Holy Ra, er I mean crap...what a cool fic! I wanna see more! *starts to throw a tantrum*

Well...neve rmind since I still have to go look for more like this, work of art well you're not named art aren't you? Just keep it up! ^.^ See ya!

wow. i wish i could write like that! this was beautiful. you really caught the sweet, mysterious side of love. i tend to go for the harsher more twisted side. that's why i find it so interesting that we both used the same qoute from romeo and juliet.

I really suck at writing reviews. I really do. But i will leave one because I loved this! It was awesome and sweet. ~ Rave

*chuckles* Most welcome, you are.

Oh, and the fic was spiffy, but I think you knew that already. ^_~

WoW that was really deep and soo beautiful there are not enough words to describe how deep and understanding that was Please write again soon you don't have to add on to this but another story like this would be cool for me... ^_^
*sigh* how lovely