aww i love the Severus Lily pairing and this honestly is one of the best ones i've read

omg- this was so awesome.
i cried so much though it

Beautiful. Very soft, sweet and quiet. I'm pointed here by Demeter. ^_^

absolutely wonderful. i love your writing, i love how you portraid severus in this piece of art, i always thought of him to be the poetry, love, and dark mysterious type of man if he ever had a girl.i love it

Rather good. But I just can't see Severus quoting poetry...
A crazed Lily and Severus fanatic,
-Lavinia Lavender

*bursts into applause* VERY nice! Very very nice! I'll have a friend of mine read this, she'd enjoy it too! I wrote my own Severus/Lily fics, but yours are way better!

Oh man, this is beautiful.

You get a bag of oreos and some blueberry pie for this, author-person!

This is a beautiful story. Exactly how I imagened Snape to be... I love it

Hmm, I would say that this is a fantastic story. Very good too. Keep up the good work. Lily and Snape forever.

Aw, they are so cute and ickle and SUPER.

Ah! Judy! *dies of resurfacing inferiority complex*
The only thing is, I have a lot of trouble picturing Snape as remotely not ugly and creepy, and as a result all of the (Very well-written) romantic bits kinda made me go... eew. But that's not any fault in your writing, it's just my admittedly narrow view of Snape.
But as usual, all beautifully written and everything, and you are one of the very few people who can actually pull off a second-person POV. Yay!