wow have to say that was a great story, wow I really enjoyed it

This story has a great use of imagery . I really hope you write and make money for cause 'wow' that was a good story. Not just good GREAT. I'm so sad Raye was the culprit and even sadder that Queen Serenity had to die.
Keep writing. I'll be looking out for your next Sailor Moon story. Untill then...
:)

omg im crying thats a sad story

WOW
What an attention grabber!!
This story sounds cool...

Pretty good...that was a sad story but I enjoyed it completely. Now your one big mistake that I found is, it is spelled Artemis not artimus...I know you may not have known, but now you have an excuse to go back fix the multiple typos. Couple of other things, while I am thinking about it, I happen to love the song you used and btw I love some of your action scenes I never can seem to get mine to flow so well. Keep up the fantastic work and I will expect more interesting things from you. :)

~Moon-Daisuki

This is a beautiful story. You captured the essence that is Sailor Moon very well, and I haven't even seen the show in years! I has actually forgotten about it completely, then one day I decided to go through some old papers of mine. I found a drawing of Sailor Moon that I had done (it's not half bad, either) and it came back to me. I immediately got on the net and started to look stuff up. Then I came across your story. It took (takes) my breath away. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the great work!

Spook-A-Lot

Oh, I have to know what Greg told Serena. Somehow, I feel like if I know what he said it would give me a clue as to who this enemy is. It might even answer some questions and confirm some thoughts. Anyways, update soon. ^_^

ok...nice ending!

cute...
update soon

Oh, I MUST know what made Serena so upset!! And why couldn't she, nor Greg, tell anyone what it was??!! Argh! This is so frustrating!! And what's up with Serena's mood swing?? I must know!! Plz update soon!! *sigh* Sorry, I just need to know what's going on. I don't like not knowing what is going to happen. For example the ending, it was something I did not expect. Well, great story!! Keep it up!! And don't forget to update soon! hee hee. ^_^

Oh, I thought Serena's dream was real!! I was like 'that is so sweet..a little corne, but sweet nonetheless.' Then, "Darien" starts saying her name softly and then louder and louder, soon Serena wakes up only to find it was her mother saying her name. That was funny. When Darien was saying her name and she was waiting for a reply. Anyways, who is this new danger the gang will be facing?? Is it someone the know and why does she hate Serena so much?? This questons must be answered! Plz update soon!

I really like your story, and i think the all american rejects rock as well! Swing swing is a wicked song! I can't wait to find out whats up with Serena!

No! What an incredibly sad ending! Wow, great 'fic. It must be sad to know you're going to die ^^'' Please keep writing!

Your story is really good! Please keep updating:)

hey, its me! you better know who I am! ^_^ hee hee! anywayz... that was depressing... *sniffles* BUT! *big smile* it was good... although, somethings were spelled wrong! bwahahaha! and yea... anywayz... e-mail me!