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Liz the Factotum
2005-03-30
ch 1,
abuseWow...

This is amazing. Thank you.
Soul of Ashes
2004-09-19
ch 1,
abuseI always loved Joe. Such a perfect eloquent individual machina!! This poem helps portray Joe as the 'sinner' of the story of A.I. but he doesn't do it with the intention to harm because it's his job. He's programmed too...but who says he can't enjoy doing it at the same time??

Kudos to the poem. The only thing is did you intend for it NOT to rhyme?
Deirdre Blair
2003-08-18
ch 1,
abuseWow...yes, perfect for Joe. I really do love this because it really does capture what Joe is. Hehe...nice choice for the last three lines.

-Deirdre Blair
Silver on the Tree
2003-08-11
ch 1,
abuseHey, this is pretty good! Now that I think about it, those last three lines really DO fit Joe. Illustrates him very well, though if somebody read this without watching A.I. he would appear kind of evil, but then what would that somebody be doing here anyway? All right, I'm going to stop babbling now.
M. Gardner
2003-08-10
ch 1,
abuseOy!
Well personally, I always thought of Gigolo Joe as a protagonist reather than an antagonist.
I dunno, I never thought of him as criminal. He always seemed funny and silly and happy to me. That's why I liked his character so much.
But it's artistic license, isn't it?
Matrix Refugee
2003-08-09
ch 1,
abuseWow, powerful stuff there. A little angsty, but angst can be a good thing, and this is very, very good! I was hoping someone would do another Joe fic or poem...can't get enough of the artificial inamoratto. He's right: "Once you've had Mecha...you'll never want a 'real' man...again."

May I please, please link this to my website? I'm constantly tinkering with it, and I'm about due for another update, so I stumbled on this at jsut the right time.
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