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2004-06-27 . chapter 1
wow.. this was stunning.. maybe not the sugar coated frilly fairy tale that we always get for these two.. but it was absolutley perfect...
MrAndyPuppy
2003-08-31 . chapter 1
Good to see an author not afraid to project into the future and talk about stuff most people don't like to even think about.

Great job at hinting what life could be like for M/L and kept the feeling of the series alive despite the years that have passed.

Any chance of seeing what happens to their offspring in Texas?
silverstar27
2003-08-28 . chapter 1
Wow. I just read your story and I must admit you have got great writing skills. This was a great story and I hope to read more stories from you.
AngelZ
2003-08-13 . chapter 1
Wow, you really know how to make a grown girl cry. Thanks, it was a nice kind of cry.
Fair Cate
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
I dont know if I have ever read any thing so beautiful! It almost made me cry! Thankyou for writing this!
Star24
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Loved it the first time - love it even more now.

Thanks for re-posting it.

Barb
Quintossential
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
That was great, I lova that
Tears were threatening to come into my eyes
Max in a cane was kinda funny
It was dark but believable, beautiful
Thank you so much for writing this
I hope you continue

Safe
X452
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Aw, really nice- excellent. It actually made me chuckel at first imagining max with a cane!
Really gr8!
Firmament
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
Isn't that just the sweetest.
KingfisherFeline
2003-08-10 . chapter 1
This is such a beautiful piece. It brought tears to my eyes. It also has the potential to be continued, which I hope you will think about it.

Thank you so much for writing it.

Sandra
WyldeGod
2003-08-09 . chapter 1
I loved this story the first time I read it. It's very dark and haunting, but somehow, right on the money.

I know Lydecker pulled some strings to get them secured at the cabin. I know he hated doing what he did more than he would ever let on...

The end sequence got me the most. Max saying smart ** and that whole moment of their eternity...

Classic. Loved it the first time I read it and I Love it now
hope
2003-08-09 . chapter 1
wow...well done. i congratulate you in being the fist to cause tears to fall down my face with words. you are very talented and i look forwad to reading your future works. wonderful story...
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