sad

I'll be honest. This oneshot was actually really sad, but at the same time, it was really cute too. I feel bad for poor Remus. But he's so lovable.

I think you really captured his character here and I think that's utterly adorable.

If I had the time, I'd read this over and over and over again, despite it being rather depressing.

I love it!

Kelekiah Galadrian

Aw! Remus is so sweet. Mind you, most authors make him kinda cute. Apart from the whole werewolf thing. And the chocolate thing was good. I like this fic. Kinda cute. More of this kinda thing!

OOh, and a sequel to Joining the WolfPack.

You know you love me,

Audreyfical

I like it! Scary how Remus (uh..you..) take chocolate savoring to a whole new level...M...Chocolate...*drool*...

wahh! so lovely! i can relate so closely, though, it's scary . . . anyways, glad to see another '89er floating about the web, here, too!

Chocolate, the light that guides us...Ahem anyway v good but it is quite scary how much he enjoys the chocolate...more please.

Good fic! I like the chocolate thing... m... chocolate.

Excuse me please.

M... m... m... m... chocolate... m... chocolate. M...

Anyway, read my fics please! Yours are really good, Demus... :)

Very very nice idea. I like it a lot! Wonderfully original! Watch some little things hough: always write the numbers as opposed to the digits e.g. five instead of 5.

Careful with your tesnes as well- it is slunk not slinked and 'who needed Invisibility Cloaks' not 'who need'.

And it is 'nox' not 'knox'.

They're just minor quibbles- if you corrected them then this story would be perfect. I really like this- it takes a lot to write an original story these days. Well done!

Shieldmaiden

Why don't you write slash? It would make me happy *ahem*

Liked that a lot- something about guys and chocolate. Very much enjoyed Remus eating the chocolate- something quite, well, hot, about that. Other things: five people walked past him without noticing- now there's a gift we all need and the thing about silver. Having said that I'm glad he doesn't eat in public, it would get really unnerving if someone enjoyed their chocolate *that* much. Heck, slashy thoughts are coming... Good work, babe!

aww! so cute! the magpie rhym! aww! old wood has tales to tell... great story! everyone else is stupid and pitiful to not have r&r'd this! :)