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| s0hmam0miji 2006-10-16 ch 1,  | abuseIntense! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| sasateq 2005-01-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. Such emotion, and so well expressed. Very well-written, thanks so much for three good reads today. |
| Wynjara 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseFabulous. |
| Firnheledien 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWai! Beautiful, masterful, extraordinary, poignant, sensitive, sweeping and heart-wrenching all at the same time! Excellent except for the word nausea appearing too many times. I'm not a big fan of the Hakkai stuff but this is excellent. |
| UltraM2000 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseFor a first fic, not a bad one...except for the yao overtones...;) Good use of language, great expression and grammar, and an entertaining read. Keep it up. |
| real-circus 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was...like...really dark, dude. O.o Spooked me at first, but it was so cool. Yeah I liked it ^__^ |
| incandescens 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's . . . excellent. I like it a great deal. |
| Aki4 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Very intriguing. I'm a little lost on the background, not having seen the anime (and thus unsure of whether the tower and the undead you refer to are canon or to be explained ^^ ) Your style's very vivid, and you have a good grip of description. Watch out for some of the longer sentences. I'll be looking for future chapters! Ganbatte kudasai. =) PS: it's hajimeMAsshou, from hajimemasu. |