Fun little one-shot. Good job :) Harry will never have it easy, will he?

i loved it!

That was really good. I wish you could make it into a full story. Oh, and your description was brilliant as well.

Good Job! :)

It would be great if you turned this into an actual fanfic instead of a oneshot, it is a really good plot!

ohh i like it

swet!
Brillaint you captured the claustrphobia extremly well, are you per chance claustrophobic aswell?
Nevertheless it was extreely good, pity there not another chapter for this, for this story is the start of sometihng grand

awesome but i was scared shitless. i'm claustrophobic and i know how frightened you get. poor harry. loved it.

Woa...I got scared on that one, I thought I was in that closet! *shiver* It was good though

gr, draco was a total ** in this one.

OMG, you wrote it perfectly, though. I, myself, and claustrophobic - and I almost lost it just READING about it... amazingly vividly and perfectly done.

Wow, you've done a well job on conveying the scared emotions and making readers breathe as fast as Harry was. Well, close enough at any rate for me. Good job. ^^

Malfoy was a creep. UPDATE SOON!

While not very well written -your proper nouns were not capitolized, such as Potter and Harry; puncuation because when one is referring to another personally there should be a comma seperating the name from the rest of the sentence; and grammatical sentence structure, such as this copied from your own story: 'Draco peeked after them and grinned, "so Potty is claustrophobic, how interesting I’m sure father will love to hear this."' It should be more like so: 'Draco peeked after them and grinned. "So Potty is claustrophobic. How interesting. I'm sure Father will love to hear this."' When referring to a relative of some kind, unless the word "my" is before the title, such as "my father" and "my uncle", than Father and Uncle should be capitolized. Other than that, I have to say that you've adequately described claustrophobia to the fullest. Some people have it so bad that even standing in a crowd without a clear exit in sight sends them into a crying, panicking fit of nerves and, well, panic. (I being one of those people.) I can only assume you are maligned with the same problem, and for that, I am truly sorry.

Despite the grammatical mistakes, I truly did enjoy the story.

evil malfoy. great fic though.

Oh no! Poor Harry! You should write more.. like Harry's embarassment after he wakes up... maybe the professors should work with him to overcome this fear.. like putting him in closets slowly until he gets used to them. Great story so far though... :)

Wow. W-O-W. I have 5 minutes before I have to go to bed, and I must say, for such an "un-sung" writer like the rest of us, your work was very, very maticulate. Are you claustrophobic yourself? You captured the mind of a person stuck in a closet very well. The very premise for this read was excellent, and your writing was near to perfect. What I would like to see from you, is a full story dealing with the time Harry spent In that closet. What if he passed out? What dreams would he have? What if he was still awake, but was hallucinating? I think maybe, you've opened up a whole new, un-explored genre here. I would deffinately like to hear tonnes more of this style on Fanfiction.net. Way to go! Congrats!
~Shawn Seeley~