Well Jaclyn, here is another story of yours I've fallen in-love with and it's a few years to late, I so wish I was here back when you did these stories, I really would have wanted to know the results of Dee and Kelly's relationship and what happened to Deanna five years ago, but I still loved your story. Hope all's well with you. Take care!

To be honest with you at first i wasnt so crash hot on reading this fiction as i didnt like the plot how will and deanna wernt talking but as i kept reading i found the story intreeging and found my self annticipating what would happen next and now i wait for the 6th chapter and inquire as to how long it will be as i have found myself to be enjoying the story you have written.

Many thanks for the story Alexis Lynch

I love this. Please write more!

Great to see this story back Jaclyn. Keep going, will be waiting patiently for more :-D

You're back! With a chapter! :D Love the "goodbye" between Deanna and Kelly, it's so tuched, and I so want to see them happy, please don't us wait too long for next chapter!

A very compex, thrilling and just wonderful story. I like it very much. Update soon!

First, I am glad that you decided to continue the story after so many years.

Regading the Beach of Memories. . . I like the charactor interaction between Kelly and her best friend. It is spot on and I can imagine that a 12 year old would have such a conversation. The tension between Kelly and Deanna is also realistically protrayed. Kelly displays the typical cattiness of teenage girls.

Dislikes: Although there must be suspense in a storyline, I don't think Beach of Memories is very realistic. The reader is to believe that Deanna, who is a trained psychologist and Will Riker, who deals with life and death issues everyday, would not be truthful with their children as to why Deanna left. Will hasn't talk to his daughters for five years about what is going on with their mother! I shook my head in disbelief because the charaterisation is so untrue to form.

Another issue is that Kelly isn't angry with her father for not telling her anything about her mother. What a family dynamic. Heavons, I'd leave my husband and child for five years if I could be so warmly welcomed back.

I hope Troi's disappearance was for the good of the many. :-)

Fred

Or is Deanna acting like Lwxanna in Dark Page?

Wow, great story.
What happened to Deanna?

Cant wait to read more. Hope you will update soon

why did deanna leave in the first place?
this is a great story, the romance between rj and kelly is great.
btw, what does rj stand for?

Jac~I love this fic, would you update this fic in the future? The emotions are so powerful, and it cuts my heart every time when I read Deanna was hurt by her beloved daughter, what a fic. Please update this soon, I'm begging here!

How long has it been since you updated this OR Illusions of Granduer? I'm waiting...
Really great but i'm tired of reading the same chapter over and over.

You can't stop! How can you cut me off like that! I waited a month for this chapter, you have to keep going!

I say this again and again and again to lots of authors and no one pays attention!
Don't Stop!
Don't get me interested and then let me down like that!
I am loving this story and I want to read more!

keep going...r we going to hear where Deanna went?

Yay!! a new chapter! Although not to much progression i liked it. Nice interaction between the Picards and Deanna. Great characterization. waiting for next post!