Hey cool little poem you should be a fanfic writer.
Whatever..
Nice job.
Is it suposed to be yoai or is it the insight of the older brother.
well anyway good job...
Classy Raven...

Uh, to the person who posted that last review:
please lighten up. I think you interpreted it wrongly, and even if you didn't, everyone is entitled to their own opinions.
My own opinion is that this was a beautiful, well-worded piece, with a subject that was appropriate, given what we know about the bond between brothers (even if they sometimes want each other dead *smile*)
oh, and there is such a thing as brotherly love. Ever been to Philly?

Arent they brothers STUPID FUCK
and even if they arent brothers though Knives and Vash are too cool to be queer

This is a good poem, you did a good job!

oh...it's so sad. It's really beautiful. Nice job. :)