What is the point of this story? You have some spelling problems too. And do you think we're complete idiots? I think we should know what a deadlock is

It was ok,but i really dident understand the whole point of it,but i guess a story whole was...semi well? i just see no point in keeping it up no hard feelings but i have no good feelings for it..
buh-bi-Shana

The writing's great! You've got them down pat.

Wow, great story. I should write something..better, but. Just know that I'll be following this one all the way through.

hi
you have reviewed me twice and this was the only way i could think of to respond (ive already uploaded my new chappie), I have one question, what actually is a beta reader and how do i go about getting one, in case you have forgotten my fanfic iz friends, or lovers, by crazyblonde. you should also think about how you give out your advice as your first review was quite upsetting.

nicole

Gah, someone stole my first review space. :p Of course, I love it. It's so IC, and what happens is so...breathtaking. ;p

please write some more!