 Shinigami Gotenks 2004-02-03 . chapter 2Sorry for taking so long to review. UPDATE! (Great chapter by the way.) |
 ColdFang 2003-11-14 . chapter 2Nice work. |
 Shinigami Gotenks 2003-11-02 . chapter 1Good fic! Though you did spell Genkai and Yusuke wrong...it doesn't matter though, it's still a good fic. Please R&R my fics! |
 Chimmoku 2003-10-19 . chapter 2 All around good story. You had some spelling issues...Like with Yusuke...YUSUKE...not however you spell it. And Genkai...GENKAI. Look I'm Japanese and so you outta believe me when it comes to spelling Japanese names. But keep up the story. Don't let my words stop you from writing more. |
 SARAH 2003-09-14 . chapter 1 you spelled kurama worng |
 Squeakers 2003-08-10 . chapter 1Yeah it was good. hope you right some more. |