thats funny. protect the squirrels lol. i had a good laugh.

i think this is a really good storry. you should keep going. should add some other stuff like romance or some thing you know. i enjoy this story so keep up the good work.
(sorry for any spelling mistakes)

i like sound wave he's so loyal to megatron/galvatron. it would be a shame if he dies

G'day i think this story is really good! hot rod has always been my favorite charactor i think that this is the best story i'v read on fan fiction before so keep up the good work mate! cant wait for the next chapter!
love always sam

Please can you post more?!?!?!

this is a very cool story, glad to know that Elita is still alive. that should make optimus and rodimus happy.

This story has a somewhat dark theme to it, but iI really like how it is going. I hope this isn't the last chapter you do. I would like to read more.

So your English isn't that good? Says who? This story is very, and I mean very, well written. You've done a tremendous job with capturing some angst going on in that "boy bot's" (Hot Rod's) head. This story is really taking off. I cannot wait for the rest.

Hooray for Gen1! (A recent visit to a comicbook shop renewed my interest in Transformers, whee)

Great take on the aftermath of the series. Hot Rod did have a lot to live up to. And the idea of the Autobots finally doing "paperwork" to help relations with humans is just a funny image. Yay.

As for English not being your second language, I'm really impressed. There are maybe a few little proofreading things I've found in this fic that can be edited, but other than that, this reads a lot better fics I've read. Good job!

::will be reviewing sporadically as she reads in chunks of chapters::

Hiya, I'vw read this story in one turn, kinda glued to the screen. I honestly think it's one of the very best because you make sound everyone so 'normal'. Don't know how to phrase it properly.Sorry.

You write really dithyrambic (got that from my dictionary ^^;) one could always laugh or cry with the characters.

Yeah so long babling comes to an end...
please, please, please, please write on. make it epic and the fans happy.
:D

Man, it's about time I review this. I've been up late the past 3 nights reading this story, I didn't want to stop it's so good. You've done a great job writing this story. It's not all drama, though, it's been nice to see the humor bits in this (Soundwave telling the Autobots to protect the squirrels was great). I really enjoyed reading the chaos that ensued in the repair bay with all the cassettes there. But then I'm a sucker for Blaster, so it thrills me to no end that he's in this story.
And I find the who Prime situation you have going on fascinating and really quite clever. There's a few typos here and there but the mistakes aren't glaring, by any means. Keep up the great work!

YAY! You're back! Well, this is a great start to get back on track. Hopefully, there will be more very soon.
Update soon.
Wicked Woman

OptiMoose, are you still here?
You said you wold have updated in January, but it's already April and there're no news about you!
Please, please, PLEASE continue this fic soon! It's too good to remain incomplete!

Greetings.
First of all, I'd like to apologise for the lack of my reviews for the last few great chapters. My ISP account was closed and I went through a lot of company crap to get back online.
Secondly, I'm honoured you dedicated chapter 8 to me. It meant a lot.
Third, I can understand putting this story on hold until you deal with real life. I've had to do this, and as such, find it a little hard to write as well.
In any event, good luck and please update this story, as soon as you can.
Thank you.

Oh thank god! When I saw author's note as the title for this chapter, I really thought you were discontinuing this. *uses electronic thingy from hospitals to get heart beating again*
That's much better. Well, I hope you get your work completed in January. Good luck with the evil dust bunnies too.

Wicked Woman