Is it really terrible that the end made me grin a little? My reasoning was 'Now H/D only have Harry standing in their way'

I'm a bad bad person!

woah dark.

Gosh!! Got enough suspense in there lol I was like the whole way through who's going to die!?? Fantastic twist at the end!! Poor Ronny boy!!

Wow, this is incredibly good, though very depressing of course. I really like how, although you told us from the start that someone would commit suicide, I couldn't be sure who it was until the end, because they all had reasons to want to kill themselves - Harry, because he felt like he brought death to those he cared about; Hermione, because her friends didn't accept her relationship with Draco and she felt she had to choose; or Ron, because the girl he loved had broken up with him and loved someone else instead - though of course I don't think there can ever be a good enough reason to commit suicide, because suicide is never the right solution to life's problems. Harry and Hermione had someone or something remind them before it was too late, but Ron ended it before he could rethink his decision... so sad... The story was highly realistic, believable and in character though. And it made me think. I would add it to my favorites, except that I never add one-shots to my favorites. But it is one of my favorite one-shots. Anyway, I think you're a brilliant writer, and I plan on reading all of your stories here eventually...

I thought it was kind of obvious that Ron was going to be the one to kill himself, 'cause at the same time he was losing Hermione, he didn't have another reason with the same value to continue for, unlike the other two, to try and forget what had caused him so much pain. It was pretty cool though, so.. keep up the good work..I think you're an awfully good writer, which should represent at least a tiny part of who you are as a person.. (bow) Eva :)

Ok. Wow. That was, in a word, creepy. I was so confused. At the begining, you said one person would commit suicide. I thought it was a morbid topic, which I normally don't like, but I read it, anyway. It was Harry, it was Hermione, it was Harry, it was Hermione. It was Ron! I'm so confused. However, when Hermione was in the library, and all we got was "What in hell do you think you're doing?", I was hoping it was Draco who said that. And it was! I've read many Draco/Hermione stories, most of which suck, but yours was phenominal. I'm going to go read more of your work. You're an amazing author!

This is a good fic.. but I feel horrible that Ron killed himself.. and Hermione and Harry with the self harming thing. I like your fics because they are down to earth.. they deal with real problems in real peoples lives.. breakups, self-harming, guilt and all the important things that we have to deal with everyday.
Devoted fan,
Mango

The intrigue was great! It was really scary trying to figure out which one will it be, or maybe all of them... But the start was kind of awkward, though. But the idea ir great :)

Woah. That was interesting.. Lol I like the second to last paragraph talking about how Ron would have to pretend to be happy while Hermione and Draco had a 'brood'. Lol That made me laugh. Then Ron killed himself, that made me kind of sad. =]

this was amazing. characters were captured beautiful. why are you so amazing. all your stories are astounding!

you are an excellent writer. i've read some of your other fics and have enjoyed them all. this one was different. i found it difficult to believe since you didn't explain about the history between hermione and draco in your story.

You highlighted the flaws in their character, but you didn't show the positive sight.

Hermione had a saviour - Draco, Harry had a saviour - his vendetta, but Ron had noone, and that's where I think you're wrong.

Nonetheless, the shock factor is very strong in this story and it works well.

Oh God. That was so, so amazing. I loved every bit of it. Poor Ron.

that was so sad... u_u

AUGH! Wow. So sad, and angsty...wahh! They decided against suicide, both Hermione and Harry, then Ron dies...aw, this was so sad. Great story though.