This was a very all around good chapter. Bubbles dying actually made me cry. I'm not usually a weepy girlie girl, but you write stories perfectly. The appearance of Bunny was actually pretty cool, because most people would just have her randomly appear. Nice job!

** what a brat princess is so annoying obnoxious bratty and spoiled i hate her

will you add on to this i want to read princesses plan

squeals happily

*is crying to hard to speak*

BUBBLES NO

aw poor miss keane she deserves a kid she is so sweet and she teaches kids everyday why deny her a kid

cute this is so cute

Great story! lot's of good morals.

I love your character interactions. It seems like you now the characters well! I like your fresh approach on the RRBs, because lord knows that's been done to death before, but this is spot on. This is very well written, and I can't wait to read more from you!

I feel so much better now that Bubbles is alive, the Rowdyruffs have a family, and everything else! ^__^

WHAT?!?!?! Bubbles DIED?! That's just horrible! Too depressing for me!

Interesting story! Good to see Bunny back (whee, she's now puff-sized! :D ) as well as the Rowdyruff boys too! I'm wondering the same thing - will Princess find a way to turn cute Jojo back to evil Mojo in the next sequel? I think we'll just wait and see! :)

It's not so much the length of a fanfiction story that people are worried ab out, as the length of the individual chapters in it, DyNaMoDave. A fanfic that is split into a few long chapters won't be read and reviewed as much as the same story would be if it were split into many shorter chapters.
Anyway, I'll get off my soapbox about that now. :D I would comment on what I've read since the last review, but 2 chapters and the epilogue would be a little much.
Needless to say, this was a brilliantly constructed story from start to finish (Oh, I thought Sam and Michiko had actually appeared once in the TV show - clearly not... :S), and in now respect was it tediously predictable (though it was fairly easy to see where the general gist of the story was headed, which is a good thing... :D). Kudos.

P.S. Will there be a sequel, starting with Princess getting hold of Jojo and recreating Mojo Jojo? :)

Something tells me that although Bubbles is dead, she's not gone permanently. I mean, Bunny's died before and Mojo's machine brought her back at the beginning of this story, so maybe it can bring Bubbles back in a similar fashion... :/
This was a really great, action-packed chapter, DyNaMoDave. :D The whole grease-and-feathers and the sewage bit was absolutely hilarious, I laughed myself into a coughing fit at that section. :)
Hope to see the next (and I'm guessing from the pace of the action here, last chapter) soon. TTFN, TTYL. :D