i like life from Kirara's eyes it seems simpler and more down to earth. Almost like how children can see the truth in everything.

Aww... How kawaii... It's a good thing you did it on Kirara's point of view. I've always wondered what was going through her mind all the time. I mean, she always has this huge adorable eyes then she mews. Aw, so cute!

Thanks for a great story! Very original!

THAT was REALLY good! hehe that was soo funny...at first i thought it was shippo and then that didnt make sense...so yea i finally figured it out...very well written and nice plot it was clever...and i think that you are right..no one has done that before...

Aah, it does my writer's heart good to see new and creative ideas. I've never seen a fanfiction from Kirara's perspective, but I should've, considering Kirara is my favorite Inuyasha character. Back onto your story, I really enjoyed. It didn't move me to tears or make me bust out laughing, however, it did cause me to crack a smile and even giggle a little at the end. I'm all in for feminisim also! Go Kagome and Sango! Anyways, I'd really like to see more fanfictions from you, I've enjoyed almost all of them!

now that was cute!

Wow... this is very original. I like it.

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I'm a little rusty in anime-fandom speak but... KAWAII!!

(In case I'm rustier than I thin, that was meant to be 'cute'. lol)

Lol, nice! Is this a one-shot? 'Cause I can't imagine it contining... would probably ruin the last part for me. Go Kirara! Girlz rule! ^_~ Je ne, kami-sama bless, and keep writing!

that's hilarious! in the begining, i thought it was Shippou, but obviously not. this is really cool.

lol...that was cute
I would have never thought of using Kirara's perspective for a fic.
keep it up!

Oh how cute and original. Since this is Chapter 1 I can't wait to see what Kiarara thinks of Sesshomaru, Naraku, and all the others.