u should work on...ANOTHER ONE! MWAHHAHAHA! nice pairing by the way. this is like, the only good story of akane and ranma. like the whole "dark ranma" thing too. it added to the story alot.

loved the story! i read it in one sitting! and now.. its 2am! hahahaha! even if ranma was evil, i still liked him! am i bad? its cute how he was pleading for Akane's hand in marriage though. i love your stories btw, im hounding on Desperate Princess now. :)

I love The Prize story!
Thanx!
P.S.
I'm gonna check out your other storys!

This story was really good! I really enjoyed reading it:) The only thing that seemed rushed to me was the change of Ranma for the better, but that's no biggie! Keep up the great work!

Yes, the ending was corny, but that's okay, because I like corn.

WOW! what a great story, I really enjoyed it!
Ranmas kinda a perv in this story though, is he not?

This is such a cute story! X3 so refreshing from all the other M-Rated stories; it's like, only a bit of sexual tension, and not a lemon in every chapter :D thank you very much for yet another refreshing, enjoyable story. :)

What a great story! I love it! ...wonder what happened to his pet though...

That exerpt you had in one of your chapters...If you find out what story it is, i'd love to know.

I suppose it's really your choice, but I think you skipped to the ending too fast. I don't think Akane would have reacted so calmly to being taken away from her home, her title, and most especially her family. Even if Kasumi and Nabiki were really her family, she was basically moving in with complete strangers.

Also I find it hard to believe that she would love, and accept Ranma (without a huge fight) so quickly. Just a few points that I think could make the story more suspenseful and exciting. Either way I enjoyed the story as a whole and I enjoy all your writings, please continue creating.

Now off to read 'Tokens'!

My God...is it over already?
i simply loved it...
great story n i m sure i might reread it again n again...
keep up the good work...
Peace...

YAY.

You know, I DO in fact have homework to do, and rereading fanfiction is not really the best way to go about doing it. And yet here I am, once again. Argh. The things you do to me. XD

Yes, so. I keep wanting to favorite this, and then I want to fav everything by you (shh, that's my secret), and the only reason I don't is because then my Fav Stories will get ungodly long, and I figure that since I already have a couple on there by you, and you're in my favorite authors, people will know you're good, and I don't have to actually fav it to make that known.

Academically, it's a sound hypothesis.

...oh, hell. I think I'll do it anyway. XD

Corny ending it might be but I love it all the same. Actually, I dont think its really -that- corny to be with. I loved the ending. xD And the whole ' Will You marry me' jig...Eh, I guess thats consider the ending eitherway.

So, What have I done all day? Really nothing, except read your fanfiction. Geez, I've been on a role lately. I do love this story of yours though! How Ranma started off in the begining, and still was until like three or so chapters ago.

And the whole idea in general! Yes, Killing Kulloden off like that did seem a bit rush, but eh..-shrugs- Oh well. I wonder if his name has actually some point to it. And a Timid Akane? Something you really don't often see. I love it how you made become more of her character.

And Happosai! I can actually like the little pervert in this fanfic. =D It was a little strange though the last names, but eh it works. Something had to work like that to continue the plot. Also, did you ever find that story? I'm also interested about it now. I would love it if you email and tell me if you did so or not.

Well...That was sixteen chapters of, ' Gasp!', Laughter, and, ' I can't believe he done that!'

Off to explore your other stories now. ^^


-Rin

Yes, I am reading ALL of your stories because they are all turning out to be quite good reads! I have to say that your style of writing is such that I think you could make paint drying seem interesting. I do wish some other stories were finished, but I will take what I can get I suppose..*sniff*
This story I could tell was a bit rushed in places, but that's my only critique and I know it's not your norm. Thanks for all the great stories!

i didnt sleep just to finish this fic! does that mean anything huh? =p

Wow... Very good! briliantly good!
If you only changed the names, it could've been a great original story, a great fantasy one =)

i'm looking forward to read more things you write =D

Paru.