*falls over self in laughter* RA! That was beyond funny! A pity Zach didn't meet his clone! Then he would know what Ami meant when she said the 'gay one!' I think it's too funny! *snickering* And Lita found her old boyfriend! I often wondered if her old boyfriend was a chameleon, cuz in a fanfic Raye complained that Lita's old ex must be a chameleon since every boy in the street looked like Lita's old boyfriend...Besides I like Nephrite being Lita's old boyfriend instead of Freddy! Cuz Freddy sounds like a jerk...

This story is so funny, I love the rei and jadeite part. The other couples are really great too. Can't wait to see what happenes when they eat dinner with Jared's family. I see that you haven't updated for a long time, hope you finish the story cause it's really good.

Oh that was so sweet. I love reading gen/sen fics. I love Mako/Neph and Ami/Zoi! This was sappy romance that I really needed to start off my day.

Well, I've been wanting to read this for the longest time, and I finally did it! It was great, and so funny!! (especially the Raye and Jared part!!) Not to be a nag or anything, but I was kinda wondering when you would update you LIFE AFTER SAILOR MOON fic. I really like it and I have been waiting for you to update, but you haven't for a while. I'd really appreciate it if you updated your fic! Please, please, PLEASE!

No prob...I know on one of my stories I posted I was re reading it and saw tons of errors. I was all like thinking ACK why didn't someone say something. I'm surprised I didn't notice all the errors to begin with, but its always harder to find mistakes in your own work than in someone elses. Maybe cause you know what its suppose to say or something so you read it correctly anyway.

Thanks Sailor Galaxy for pointing out the typo's I fixed them so it should be fine now...sorry about that but I typed up all the chapters really earlly in the moring...and that tends to make errors glad that you liked the story

Cin

Lita's story was really cute. "He looks like my old boyfriend!"...lol. I liked Rei's story too, but all of them were good. However,I noticed some mistakes on Rei's and Lita's stories and thought you might want to know about them so you can correct them.

At the beginning of Rei's story you say its 5 months later and 2 months after the fatal plane, crash that had taken Chad’s life. Is it suppose to be 5 months and 2 weeks or maybe 2 days?

Also on Rei's story when you first introduce the Onstar lady you call her Vikki, but then you start calling her Nikki after that. At first I thought it was just Rei being rude to her by calling her the wrong name, but then Jared starts calling her Nikki too.

On Lita's story after she goes to look around the restaurant Max calls her Miss Hino instead of Kino.

Ok Baka means stupid,idiot, moron...get the picture

Poor guys, the things that they'll go through for love. By the way, what does "Baka" mean? My former room-mate always said that, but never took the time to tell me what it means.

Ok the only reason that I have Ami a little wilder is that she isn't really thinking in the story...her mind isn't functioning the rational way that it usually does...being dumped by a boyfriend that you've known since you werer 14 can tend to do that to a character and then finding out that Zoisite was alive well that would floor anyone... Just some notes almost done with the story...Lita and Nate will be the last chapter...happy reading...that way I can work on Life after Sailor Moon again...

Cin

THE STORY WAS REALLY GOOD. THAT WAS ALL I WANTED TO SAY. SO BYE
P.S. WRITE MORE!

i like this chapie its so funny. so bye bye

I love your story's, they're increadily cute, even though Ami is a little more wild the her real character but it works for her can't wait to read the rest of it.

Great story. I love the story line. Keep up with the great writing. I can't wait until the next chapter.

I REALLY LIKED IT AND PLEASE UPDATE!