I LOVED IT! i've been a huge fan of this show since 20, i started reading fics since 2003, and i started writing them since 2005-ish. The begining i sorta skipped, but then i started noticing your sarcasim(sp?) which i liked. this was one of those things where, if put in this situation, i know that is exactly, or extremely close, to how they would act. And when the child showed up, before he even said squat about the ladies, i'm like, MIROKU and SANGO FOREVER, MAN! That's how many fics i've read. I pretty much already know who's who. I LOVED (already said this) your sarcasim! that's what i do, angst/humor/dark humor/Douglas Adams humor/sarcasm/romance/randomness. i'll post my IY fics here someday. I think you should publish a novel. You're amazing, and i normally don't find too many of those. This was my Inu/Kag take on the story... if you wanna read the random, RP-like, jibberish coming out of my mouth at their points of view in different parts of the story:
MOLDY FOOD-
InuYasha: *lays in bed with only his hakama on* go to sleep.
Kagome: No. this is a really good story.
Inu: yeah, i know. you've been readin' out lout.
Kag: "I picked up the moldy cheese and tossed it over my shoulder (I would pick it up later)..."
Inu: *laughs* that is so sad...
Kag: like you could do better...
EMOTION CALANDER-
Kag: you know i seriously do that.
Inu: ya have to or you'd go insane. I mean, you live with ME.
PRICK BOSS-
Inu: wouldn't you rather get fired?
Kag:... I needed money...
Inu: I hate fat, bald guys with bad breath. they seriously creep me out. i'd hate to be workin' for one.
Kag: in other words, monk Mushin creeps you out?
Inu: uh, DUH!
Kag: you're an **...
MIROKU'S BABY-
Kag: "He lowered his weapon a fraction.
"Well," he said, "I can see you are defiantly no warrior, but that doesn't explain what you were doing in Inuyasha's Forest at this time of day. You look mighty suspicious."
Inu: That's Sango's baby.
Kag: Totally. ""I'm not a little kid!" he said defensively. "My daddy says I'm a handsome man who will someday have ladies lining up and begging me to let them bear my children!"
Inu: That's Miroku's baby.
Kag: Totally.
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There's more (going into why Kagome is wearing glasses and InuYasha being a nagging ** and trying to get her to sleep)but that would be an even bigger chunk of your life that you can't get back! ^__^ I've never written a review before so i don't think i should do that, but... er... sorry... Is it complete? I don't have an E-mail so you can't answer that, but... i guess it sounds pretty complete. I think you have amazing talent. I don't get to read a lot of these but, this was the kind of story that, when you start reading, you get this feeling in the pit of your stomach, and this wasn't even angst! that's amazing that you can do that. Seriously, make a novel. You have my utmost respect
sincerly, aspiring writter, who, ONE DAY, will have her fics on this site. A.K.A. BaKa-NEKO
P.S. don't hate me for sending you a never-ending block of text. Obviously, i have no life. ^.^

Okay, you did very very very very very very good, lol. You wrote an amazing story, and yes I realize that the last time you updated was 3 YEARS ago. Normally I have a 6 month review limit, if they haven't updated I normally don't waste the time (-cringes- sounds horrible when I write it like that)But I just absolutely loved your story! So I broke my little rule. I understand from your Bio that it appears that you just kinda lost the drive to write; but I wanted to let you know that the work you did was amazingly awesome. You made the whole story personal and I was sad to see it was uncompleted; but without dwelling on the sadness I just wanted to tell you that it was and still is a great story and that you have a talent, even if you dont realize it.

awe the major fluffiness was an added bonus to absolutly loving this story! it's awesome make sure you update soon!!
-Tahitianbabe

AW, that's so sweet! You do an excellent job with your writing. Keep up the great work.
~~Pyro

You are so good! I couldn't write a paragraph of fanfiction if I wanted to. Anyways keep up the good work!

Why isn't there a seventh chapter yet!
Helo!
I've been waiting almost a year to read it!

very nice fic, love inu/kag relations so far, can't wait to find out what happens next. Hope you update soon.

Don't change a thing! I really like your story! Please write more if you can.

Hello CracksinthePavement!
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(Wow, I kept wanting to add spaces in between your pen name. ^^;;)
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This is squeakyinuears, reviewing! *Clears throat* I feel I must explain myself. I had actually come across your story a few months ago, during winter break, to be precise. However, I never actually got around to reviewing. . . Indeed, I have been behind on my reviews ever since winter break and my trip to China, and somehow. . . your story was placed on the backburner.
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By the time I finally found some time to drop you a line, I realized that I did not remember enough of your fic to do it justice. Since then, it has become a quite a juggling act, trying to balance out college, work, writing, and reviewing. So I couldn't really find the time to re-read this fic.
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Until today, that is. Actually, I STILL don't have the time, and I really should be studying, but I felt that enough was enough, and I really needed to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this story.
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*Taps chin* Writing in first person is a very difficult thing to do, particularly if the piece is to be well-written. For accomplishing both, I commend you. I haven't come across very many stories written in first person, even less that I actually liked. Your writing in here from Kagome's point of view is very realistic, very down-to-earth.
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It's not too flowery and descriptive, and I don't think it should be that way, not if it's supposed to be her thoughts and recounting. There is a lovely simplicity to this tale that appeals to me.
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As for your comment about it being your first fluff scene - good job! I think it was well-done. I believe most authors fear that their fluffy moments will sink from romantic to just plain cheesey (I have it all the time), but I think this chapter was nicely written. It was believable, and I thought the dinner scene was very cute.
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I only have one question. In the previous chapter, Sango mentions that Inuyasha's arrogance seems to have rubbed off a bit on her son, Masaru. However, in this chapter, she clearly states that after Kagome left, Inuyasha only went through the bare motions of living. That he lost his will to do anything.
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Forgive me, but that seems a bit contradicting. Of course, it could be that you will explain more of this in later chapters, and I'm just getting ahead of myself. In any case, my confusion in this did nothing to retract from my reading enjoyment.
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Anyway, I apologize once again for the extreme lateness of this review. I hope that this review reaches you in good health and spirits. ^^

OK! This is SOO GOOD! Please if you want go ahead and add some more chapters!! :)
OH! and this is not Mizuhi Sakura, I am her friend Tokyoprincess25. ( im just borrowing her account!) :) GOOD JOB!! :)

Oh, come on already!
Make the next chapter!
You authors are really slow.

Please please post another chapter soon. I would love to know what happens next

I love your story. It's not like any I've ever read. Please update soon!!

Hey!
You may think that this wasn't all that pleasing, but I really enjoyed it. I like how you have them still holding back and not just leaping immediately into each other's arms like happens so often in fics where Inuyasha and Kagome were separated.
Anyways, I'm finding this quite enjoyable and I really look forward to more!
Have fun and keep writing!
Love,
Hope and Harmony

PLEASE update soon! This is an awesome story and I want to know what happens next!