Holy poo! Everyone is just hopping tents these days, aren't they? So when is the hottie Luis going to have to be the knight in shining armor and save the rest of the team? Oh yeah, and Cecilia will be there too. Why did that creepy old man lock them in there, anyway? Just because Julie is annoying. Because that would be very mean. Well it's very mean anyway. Okay, now I don't even know what I'm talking about anymore. The part about treating her to a tasty meal of porridge made me laugh. So did the part about vaccums of suckage. I can't guarentee that I'm not going to start using that. Anyway...the point of this whole thing...hurry up and update more. I'm serious, if I have to wait that long again I just might...I don't know. Be mad. Or something.

ohh! *bounces* I am glad you guys are back! I have been waiting for an update from you two! Oh, are Cecilia and Luis going to be a permanent item? Or is it going to be a one time thing? Well, don't leave me hanging, update soon! -Em

Wow that was a fast update. I like it! Does Samantha have like an alternate personality? I think it would explain a few things, actually. But hey at least she admits something is wrong with her. That's always a plus. Are they locked in a trailer thing for a reason or just cuz that creepy old man thought Julie was annoying? Update soon okay?

Man Julie's annoying! If I was there I'd probably have hit her a long time ago. And now her annoying-ness is going to give them problems! I did love the Luis part. He gave Portman exactly what he deserved. And thank you for sparing his face, too. ANyway, update just a little quicker this time, do you think you could?? Just a suggestion...PLEASE!

YAY! MORE TROUBLES! This is Chelsea, by the way. My other account. I write on here now because I have issues. BOY it's been a damn while! Holy jeebus! I've kind of forgotten what's been going on but I can't forget Portmans stupidness and Luis' comforting ways. Ha. I got Newsies for Xmas, and after watching AAron Lohr as MUSH for so long, i've completely dismissed him as Dean Portman. POrtman is still my fave, despite his crude actions, but something tells me he'll be okay. PLEASE make sure there is a quicker updation of the next chapter! Me begs you!
-Chelsea Codename: Storm Shadow-

oh shneaky. good chapter. keep updating. i really like this story. keep writing. sorry for the sucky review. im just not that good at this kind of thing
-Emily

Oh no! If Luis goes after Portman, Portman will probably squish Luis like a bug. But he would be a quite hot bug. Heh. Julie is a total psycho. I think if I had to hang out with her the way she's acting for more than five minutes I'd probably go nutso and kill her. I'm glad Cecilia and Luis are getting together cuz Cecilia is really cool and they would be so cute together! Well, if Cecilia looks the way I picture her they would look cute together. And since I'm the reader I'll picture her how ever I want. And I love when Luis gets to be happy. So you better make him be happy. But it's also very cute when he's sad. Oh well, this review is getting too long. Hurry and update!

Ah, stupid Portman. You **. Things better work out with him. You can't leave me in the dark like this, girls! Anyway. I love Luis now. But not as much as I love Porty, but Luis is so hot in a hot way. Him and his comforting ways. I hate when guys do that in stories and they're all like 'its okay blah blah blah' but this was cute because it was luis. luis is fine. anyway. whomp for protected sex! i'm a retarded girl with a sick mind and I think thats funny. SUE ME! I will definitly continue to review until this end because this hot piece of ** story is wickedly awesomely awesome. Its the taste thats so much more. ha. reeses. anyway. I watched identity. Woo me. It was confusing. I love John Cusack hes like my idol now. No wait. Edward Furlong is my idol. I have a lot of problems, one being that I think that Eddie Furlong is my idol. Another is being so obsessed with this story. So many things are going on and its great fun. Especially the Portman/Cecila/Luis situation. Can't wait for Luis to confront Porty. That'll be a swing in the park! hahaha. good luck with the next chapter I'm sure it'll be kick **!
-chels

oh sex revenge very good. Freds being a jerk though he deserves it. good chapter, id like to see more quickley so you had better get typing or i will send a horny Portman who is trying to win a bet out to get you.

Portman! How could he? You know what *I* tihnk Cecilia should do?? *I* think she should go to Luis. Because *Luis* is a nice guy, and *he will* take care of her, and *he won't* take advantage of her, and *he won't* get her drunk. So yeah, that's my opinion!! Of course, all my opinions revolve around Luis in some way or another. My whole *brain* revolves around Luis in one way or another. More Mike Vitar than Luis, but you get the point. Anywho, I'm getting annoying and boring rambling on and on about Luis/Mike (even though he's extremely hot!!) so I'll just say: great chapter, put another one up soon! (please!)

WHOO HOO FOR SEX SCENES!! HAHAHA GAWD! I usually LIKE Portman. But now I'm ready to kill that bastard. I hope . . .hope hope hope hope hope hope he will turn into this nice guy in the end. that would be nice. freds the only cool guy now that Portmans a jerk faced moron. ROAR!! I'll kill that mofo!! SCREWING A MINOR! AAH! Whatever. This chapter was awesome. It was a LONG chapter which was great fun for me. hAHAHA. Julies POV was HILARIOUS! hahaa. Some funny ** there girls! Congratulations. I always say that but its completely true. you guys rock and this story couldn't get any better, just like how if you stuck racetrack, gabe damon, corey haim and eddie furlong in a bubble bath, THAT couldnt get any better either. wow. that was a killer vision man. wot. im off to read A DUCKS TALE. woot woot!
-chels

Guy, you're being stupid! Your story is so good, you could make Luis the villian and I'd still read it. I wouldn't be happy, but I'd read it. I recently became obsessed with Connie/Guy, so I'm telling you now I want them together. But it's your story, you so what you want. Even though they're meant to be. Hint hint. Anyway, great story. Update soon!

YAY! An update! WHOO HOO! As always, this never ceases to amuse me. Ha. Well, maybe not friends, because friends is a lame show and I dont like it anymore (well, except for that cheesecake episode with rachel and chandler that was on today) but I was OBSESSED with it in gr. 5. And thats putting it lightly. I would like to state that portman and fred rock and I cant wait to see what portman does to win that dirty, rotten bet he's got goin' on there. I can't WAIT to see where you dudettes go with all of this. it's truly great. woot woot for first kisses at 17 and dirty rotten escapades. *hops around singing*
-chels

Yep, you caught me...i am waiting for adam to surrender to me! It's always been a dream of mine, I'm not going to lie to you. *sigh* I guess I should get over that. Uh-oh, kens going to be deflowered? Haha I've always hated that word. I don't really know why i used it. Well, I say Go Kenny! He's another one who seemed to me like he was in dire need of some play. But that's just me.

Now i'm gonna stop assessing the ducks and their sex lives...and on with the actual review-

another great chapter, as always! I love this story, its so drama filled and i get so very excited when you update it! So Guy and Samantha shared a lip-lock whoop whoop! Thats exciting. So has he totally forgotten connie?

And Portman seems to be scheming...that cant be good! Cant wait to see what that boy is up to. He's a cool cat...but a little mischevious.

I cant wait for the next chapter, please update soon. Because you know me, i love this story wayy too much!

Wow...you can't get much more pure evil than that...but I think Portman's got his work cut out for him. Somehow I can't really picture Cecilia going for that, but you never know! Or rather, I never know, but you guys do cause you're writing the story! Nevermind...
But yay for Ken getting the girl! And wow, Connie and Fred sure have a...volatile...relationship. And I feel bad for Guy...lots of us suck at this thing called love...