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| Kat 2003-09-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseWOW, this is such a cool and creep-you-out ending! It really makes you think, and it doesnt tell everything so it kinda leaves you hanging! And you even worked in 47...your so sneaky! Props to you, its a good one! ~Kat |
| Celtic-Mage 2003-09-05 ch 5,  | abuseAmazing, amazing writing and amazing style, I'd like a sequel if you are willing to write one! ~Dragon~ |
| Raina Elizibeth 2003-09-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseThat's the end? Jen. we don't even know what's going on! |
| melizz 2003-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseholy crap. "They walked out onto the balcony. And watched as their perfect view slowly fell to the ground. Destroyed. Demolished. La Tour d'Eiffel n'existe plus. And wondered silently what would be next. " did you just do what i think you did? and if you did... is that seriously the end? holy crap... |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-31 ch 5, | abusewhoa... short and intense! odd place to end... keep it going! :) |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-31 ch 4, | abuseo!! i love it!! great twist and good ending note, love the suspense! :) |
| Yostamaca 2003-08-31 ch 4, anon. | abuseOkay, hi again. Feel need to explain self. Loved it. Lots. Scared? Very. But still loved it. |
| Yostamaca 2003-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseHOLY **! You can't end it like that! I'll go insane! I am insane!! Wah! *goes to find a cool, refreshing Zima, and to grab an fudge bar, suddenly feeling the need to cool herself down* |
| Vaughn's Jenn 2003-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseI just wanted to reply to one of the reviews: they don't take a cold shower because of the fact that it's a heat wave. The extreme heat would not only immediately heat up the water but make it boil and evaporate too adding to the humidity in the atmosphere and also burning the people attempting to shower. thanks, i hope it makes it more understandable now~ -Jenn |
| Lizz 2003-08-31 ch 5, anon. | abuseWhy don't they go take a cold shower? |
| kittyfantastico 2003-08-31 ch 5, | abuseWow. Just wow. That is all I have to say about this. Okay, not really, I have a whole lot more gushing to do because that was amazing! Brilliant! Genius! I loved how it was short simple statements, that seemed to make it more atmospheric and a sense of dread and stuff. WELL DONE! |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-22 ch 3, | abuseo! stellar ending and great plot twist! the heat wave is an ingenius idea- awesome job! keep up the great work :) |
| Jade-Tessier 2003-08-22 ch 2, | abusei love it! the shipperness and description are wonderful! i love how much he struggles to keep whatever it is a secret from syd... keep it up :) |
| nattie700 2003-08-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow! That's kinda scary, thinking about that and how if you just sweat, man that Rambaldi dude is freaky!! YAY! Bring on the fluff! |
| Lara783 2003-08-19 ch 3, | abuseLOL, every time you apologize for a chapter, I end up thinking it's incredibly awesome. :D For instance, this one. The way you come up with all of that so-called technical stuff is amazing. How do you do that??! Do you have to summon the Alias gods or something? :D Or maybe it's J.J.'s spirit...lol, anyway, that chapter was great. I loved how Syd was trying to stay so strong in the face of all that she had just heard...it was exactly the way I would have pictured her taking that kind of news. I can't wait to read more!! |