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| Mendelbra 2008-06-29 ch 2, | abuseI'm speechless. It was amazing! |
| haru no hana 2008-06-22 ch 2, anon. | abusewaahh I am MAD at you! I have a really nasty cold (more like the Flu) XD and you made me cry my eyes out! AND because of that, my nose is simping and driping water... (and what looks like jelly...?) anymay! rea³ly cute and beatifull story! I could feel the emotion rigth trougth me while reading! (or it was the flu effects) ANIWAY! I like it very much! o oh oh oh! (cougth uncotrolably) okay it stoped now.. =_=' :~ bai bai \Ô/ |
| syasya92 2008-06-18 ch 2, | abusewow...thats a really really cuutte story!aw... i love rin n sesshh as daughter father..=) keep writing summore cuutte ones!=p |
| Scarlet-Sky 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abuseYou think it's pathetic that you almost cried at that scene? Let me tell you - I did cry. (It's nearly two in the morning here, so I had to bite into my finger to keep from making too much noise, but hey. That was just too much) Sorry for the random review, I blame it on the time. Wonder how I'll sleep now, with that thought on my mind... "Must-read-more-like-that *_*V) Oh, yes. Congrats on keeping the characters in character; or at least really close, but with Sesshoumaru and Rin, we don't have a lot of interaction to judge - rather; we didn't at the time you wrote that fiction. Btw, your author note - I agree with it completely. :) skye |
| Amadoni 2007-09-22 ch 2, | abuseI just love your stories. You always seem to be so thoughtful without making the details seem boring. On top of that, you have that gift of keeping everyone in character. It is a shame though that you have moved on to other fandoms. Oh well, I guess we can't have everything we want. |
| DartGoddess 2007-08-23 ch 2, | abuseWonderful! Too bad it's really not in the Inuyasha episodes. It should be though. That would be sweet! |
| Sky Falls 2007-08-08 ch 2, | abuseThis was wonderful! You really wrote these characters well and made them realistic and fun to read about. The story made perfect sense too and the ending was lovely. There's not much to say, there's not enough words to describe how much I liked this. ^^ Incredible work. -Sky |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseAw that's so sweet. Sesshomaru so loves Rin! |
| siesie137 2007-07-14 ch 2, | abuseNice. I'm glad you gave Sesshoumaru and Rin a 'Father and Daughter' relationship instead of a 'Boyfriend and Girlfriend' one. I think Sesshoumaru is a great father for Rin. Thanks for the cute story! |
| Bloodied Sand 2007-04-06 ch 2, | abuseThis was adorable. Everything seemed just as it would be for a situation like this, I could see this as an episode or something, though I wouldn't like to. Having stuff like this in your head and then seeing it on TV kind of ruins whatever the individual reading this saw in their own mind. This was a wonderful fic, keep up the excellent writing. |
| FF Punk Chick 2007-01-25 ch 2, | abuseThis story was amazing. I really liked it. Unlike many people, you kept Lord Sesshomaru's character from faultering. I hate it when people make him different, because it's like reading about someone totally different and it ruins the whole feel of the story. |
| Super Ceech 2007-01-07 ch 2, | abuseThat was SO adorable! I loved it to pieces and think it deserves a standing ovation. :D Seriously awesome. It filled me with squee. I also love Rin and Sess's relationship is too cute. I really thought you kept them both in very reasonable limits of their characters too. That was very sweet and it's definitely getting favourited. Good luck in future works! |
| Kylee 2006-12-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat was the best Sess/Rin father/daughter relationship story I've ever seen! Are you in college or something? It seems so, with how poeticly and descriptively you write. As soon as I get my account, I'm going to have quite a few Sesshomaru love stories to type. in the first chapter of your story, I noticed 1 or 2 spelling errors, nothing major. I can only hope that I will be able to write like you do someday, that's why I,m going to drop reading next year in 7th grade and take an advanced writing class. I love that story! Are you going to make another? Please? I love the father/daughter relationships, they're so kawaii! (Especially the Sesshomaru/Rin ones!) P.S sesshomaru is the hottest dude on Earth! I like the way he is so mysterious and keeps you guessing. It's never boring!! feel free to e-mail me... If you wish. |
| Odi et amo. 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abuseAw...That was so cute, and so very well written and expressed... *adds to favs* |
| Split Persona 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI love you for writing this. A very IC Rin, a mostly IC Sesshoumaru, but the slight changes can be very understandable after being around Rin for so long. She's just too...Rin...you can't help but love her. The flashback was so adorable I almost cried. I think I lost a tooth over it. And Rin was so confused. I do agree with your belief that she would be less comfortable around large groups or strangers. She wasn't too 'friendly' with Inuyasha-tachi when she first met them either, although she seemed to warm up to Kagome. You are one of the VERY few people who write Sess/Rin as a father/daughter relationship. And I love you for it. Such a realistic, elegant, yet modern way of writing a relationship that I think is the one of the cutest things in Anime History. So many picture Rin as growing up and falling in love with Sesshoumaru, but generally girls don't fall 'in love' with their dads once they've grown into adults. And he is her father-figure, whether most want to accept it or not. So I bow to your beautiful story, beautiful use of the English language and hope that you continue to write stories like these. |