wirte more ^^

tHE WHOLE FIC IS GREAT!! I DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO DO THIS WHEN I FIRST READ IT... YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE FICCIES!

that is a damn good story lu, i'm so proud of you, ya can tell how much effort you put nto it to make it the best oyu coudl and it definately is an icnredible read,

"heard the laughter of a third being that echoed through the night."
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Whos the third being! PLEASE write a sequel to tell us!

Its such a sensational fic I cried through some of it but I still love it. Can't wait for your next story.

Good stuff here um cliffhanger don't leave me dangling please well not very long any way ^_^ I'm hoping for some more soon please Kit^_^

that was a lovely ending.I am verry happy for them
i hope they spend the rest of there lives together.But i'm wondering who else was there?hm will you be doing another one ^_^ i hope so.

Is there going to be a sequal? i mean who was that third being? anyways Great story. ~SKF

What explain m well alright it was very good spelling and grammer a bit off but hey it happens well keep it up and goodluck with anything else you write Kit^_^

finaly Goku has told him.now comes the even harder part hu.please update again soon.Ja ne.

this is great please update soon. ~SKF

hey... this is a fantastic story. this last chapter! damn! it was amazing. it made me cry, hell! i still am crying. but ya, great work. keep it up. plz update soon.

OH MY GOD! I LOVE IT!! this is the bestest, **-like-est, sexiest story i've read so far! wow!! it's great, i love it. it's funny, and dirty and that's good! this is the best chapter by far... mmhmm...

Spelling is a little off as is the grammer but aside from that DON'T LET VEGETA DO ANYTHING STUPID GOT IT!?! Kit^_^

0_0 SAVE HIM GOKU! oh god i hope it all finishes ok.~sighs in content~ the perfect coppel Goku and Vegeta...ANYWAY!! ! please update again soon.i cant wait to see what happens.oh by the way this is TomoyoChan1.i changed my pen name.^_^ Ja ne.