It's good. Lots of feeling in it. Yet it lacks rythm. It goes much too fast, and nearly always at the same speed. Sometimes you need to slow down, make things longer, so that the reader pauses in certain parts, so letting the feelings in the text be able to really seep inside the reader's heart, instead of just being acknowledged in passing.

I'm sorry! it was the last chapter!

Great fanfic. Is this the last chapter? I hope there's more.

_ even though it's Tsukasa/Subaru I still found it cute. Maybe it's cuz I did watch the Cardcaptor Sakura movie 10 times in a row... or maybe I should blame it on His and Her Circumstances (A whole marathon of lovey dovey stuff, and now I can get back to the "blood and mayhen: marathon...)... who to blame?

wow that story itself sounded like a poem in it self sorta... anyways it was one of those really happy/ really sad kinda storys... their always so touching

...You do know Tsukasa is a girl in real life, right?

I'm a big mimiru fan... and as such... eh... as long she's in tje fanfic... is fine with me. If she's the center of attention in the fic... that's very good. So if she gets heartbroken... that's fine too. As I mentioned before... I like death and having my fav characters dying/suicide/murder. Alrigh I'm done!

That was great! Wow...is this going to become a TM or a TS? The suspense...anyways, great job! Keep up the good work! _

Aw...Subaru...

So much angst between them all...

Continue! KAWAII! So sad though...make a sequal! And make it a Subaru/Tsukasa. Or in your new fic you have, make it a Subaru/Tsukasa. Or a triangle, Tsukasa/Subaru/Kite. YEP! Please? I don't see many Tsukasa/Subaru fics. And barly any Tsukasa/Subaru/Kite fics! Please? Anyways, make a sequel to this fic that's a Subaru/Tsukasa, I feel bad for Subaru.

I think you should make a sequel! This fic is so good so I hope you do make a sequel. I feel bad for Subaru though...anyways, this fic is so cute! Hope'cha make a sequel to it

Poor Subaru... Nice fic, though. I'm glad to see another one of your fics again. _

This story was really sad:( Subaru really loves Tsukasa.

I STILL dont think Mimiru and and him hook up, but hey thats just my POV. Good story none the less ;)

That was great! Really angsty. Keep up the good work! _